KVR :: Music Cafe » Organic, Hypnotic, Chillout - Goodnight music [View Original Topic]
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vaisnava - Wed Nov 07, 2012 8:27 pm
http://atmastudios.com/share/vaisnava%20-%20loves%20meditation%20192.mp3

Some honest feedback would be awesome! Smile
fateamenabletochange - Wed Nov 07, 2012 11:28 pm
while I'm here, nice, there is a nice forwards and backwards spatial quality to this one compared to the last one I heard of yours, which was much more a wall of left and right. Really like this. Great stuff, good job.
core - Thu Nov 08, 2012 5:02 am
yum, lovely tones in this one Thumbs Up!
kryptonaut - Thu Nov 08, 2012 6:18 am
Mmmm, I enjoyed that. My only suggestion is that the ending seemed to come a bit abruptly.

I like the ethnic sound of the main arpeggiated instrument (not sure what it is).

Good work!
seismic1 - Thu Nov 08, 2012 4:10 pm
I agree with kryptonaut about the sudden ending. You could try a normal fade, or perhaps better, a staged fade, with individual sounds being faded/removed in turn until you are left with only one instrument being played. The trick is in finding the right one to leave exposed at the end. If it were me, I would try to do something melodic but unexpected Wink

Good work Smile

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