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MadPsyance · Post by **MadPsyance** » Sat Aug 27, 2005 3:55 pm

Hey Mully, your from england right?
Thank you for not sounding like coldplay.

MadPsyance · Post by **MadPsyance** » Sat Aug 27, 2005 3:57 pm

"that was nice"
That was nice indeed!
The newest version rocks my socks.

multree · Post by **multree** » Sat Aug 27, 2005 6:00 pm

hehe... well.. actually I'm from germany and people usually say I have an american accent

glad you like it.... I think there's still missing something in the chorus... I'll try some mellotron when I'm back home tonite

thanks

multree · Post by **multree** » Sun Aug 28, 2005 3:01 am

okay I got a bit carried away will trying out a guitar lick... I decided it didn't fit but still wanted to share this section....

http://www.multree.com/mp3/Riff.mp3

Markleford · Post by **Markleford** » Sun Aug 28, 2005 3:46 am

multree wrote:okay I got a bit carried away with trying out a guitar lick...

Agreed.

- m

multree · Post by **multree** » Sun Aug 28, 2005 3:11 pm

Markleford wrote:
multree wrote:okay I got a bit carried away with trying out a guitar lick...
Agreed.

- m

hehe

Sascha Franck · Post by **Sascha Franck** » Sun Aug 28, 2005 3:31 pm

I somewhat like that guitar riff. I would even make it more "brutal", but that might require changing some og the other elements during that passage as well. But I'm sure it'd add some kick.

multree · Post by **multree** » Sun Aug 28, 2005 3:41 pm

yeah well.... I feel there's still something missing in that song.... but I don't know what it is....

mystahr · Post by **mystahr** » Sun Aug 28, 2005 7:26 pm

I've been listening to the track throughout some of the stages and as much as I like how this has grown to a 'band' song, I just feel all the power still lies in the initial posting

Beautiful work from you though; and nice to hear you on the positive side

Martin E · Post by **Martin E** » Sun Aug 28, 2005 8:47 pm

My suggestion is you should combine the very first version (just vocals and ac. guitar)with the later versions. To get a better build up. The drums can come in after the first chorus. The guitar riff might be useful at the end of the song. Just an idea I had.

multree · Post by **multree** » Sun Aug 28, 2005 8:52 pm

Martin E wrote:My suggestion is you should combine the very first version (just vocals and ac. guitar)with the later versions. To get a better build up. The drums can come in after the first chorus. The guitar riff might be useful at the end of the song. Just an idea I had.

I kinda like the idea.... but I'd rather have it cut after the first chorus and come back in right before the second....

well but... nah... I somehow love it that way... I just need something else in the chorus to make it a tad bit more powerfull....

or maybe reduce the chorus... ?? not sure yet... but there's something not right that would make it perfect...

I'd rather have it more powerfull though since this will be the opening track

thanks for listening guys

[Mully] my first positive "likeyouverymuch" song