[Mully] my first positive "likeyouverymuch" song
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- KVRian
- 1191 posts since 8 Jul, 2005 from NY, US
Hey Mully, your from england right?
Thank you for not sounding like coldplay.
Thank you for not sounding like coldplay.
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- KVRian
- 1191 posts since 8 Jul, 2005 from NY, US
"that was nice"
That was nice indeed!
The newest version rocks my socks.
That was nice indeed!
The newest version rocks my socks.
- AcousticHippie
- Topic Starter
- 4525 posts since 12 Mar, 2003
hehe... well.. actually I'm from germany and people usually say I have an american accent
glad you like it.... I think there's still missing something in the chorus... I'll try some mellotron when I'm back home tonite
thanks
glad you like it.... I think there's still missing something in the chorus... I'll try some mellotron when I'm back home tonite
thanks
- AcousticHippie
- Topic Starter
- 4525 posts since 12 Mar, 2003
okay I got a bit carried away will trying out a guitar lick... I decided it didn't fit but still wanted to share this section....
http://www.multree.com/mp3/Riff.mp3
http://www.multree.com/mp3/Riff.mp3
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- KVRAF
- 3066 posts since 31 May, 2002 from My chair
Agreed.multree wrote:okay I got a bit carried away with trying out a guitar lick...
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- AcousticHippie
- Topic Starter
- 4525 posts since 12 Mar, 2003
heheMarkleford wrote:Agreed.multree wrote:okay I got a bit carried away with trying out a guitar lick...
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- KVRAF
- 13090 posts since 14 Nov, 2000 from Hannover / Germany
I somewhat like that guitar riff. I would even make it more "brutal", but that might require changing some og the other elements during that passage as well. But I'm sure it'd add some kick.
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- AcousticHippie
- Topic Starter
- 4525 posts since 12 Mar, 2003
yeah well.... I feel there's still something missing in that song.... but I don't know what it is....
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- KVRAF
- 7672 posts since 9 Nov, 2003 from Netherlands
I've been listening to the track throughout some of the stages and as much as I like how this has grown to a 'band' song, I just feel all the power still lies in the initial posting
Beautiful work from you though; and nice to hear you on the positive side
Beautiful work from you though; and nice to hear you on the positive side
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- KVRist
- 194 posts since 26 Feb, 2005 from Groningen Netherlands
My suggestion is you should combine the very first version (just vocals and ac. guitar)with the later versions. To get a better build up. The drums can come in after the first chorus. The guitar riff might be useful at the end of the song. Just an idea I had.
- AcousticHippie
- Topic Starter
- 4525 posts since 12 Mar, 2003
I kinda like the idea.... but I'd rather have it cut after the first chorus and come back in right before the second....Martin E wrote:My suggestion is you should combine the very first version (just vocals and ac. guitar)with the later versions. To get a better build up. The drums can come in after the first chorus. The guitar riff might be useful at the end of the song. Just an idea I had.
well but... nah... I somehow love it that way... I just need something else in the chorus to make it a tad bit more powerfull....
or maybe reduce the chorus... ?? not sure yet... but there's something not right that would make it perfect...
I'd rather have it more powerfull though since this will be the opening track
thanks for listening guys