can U guys give me some feedback 
http://streamer.soundclick.com/speedY/0 ... e+btvb.mp3
my first tune plz give feedback ,now the link is working :-)
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- KVRer
- Topic Starter
- 4 posts since 28 Aug, 2004
hi this is my first melodie, may be it's trance or ambiant, or just crap can U guys give me some feedback
http://streamer.soundclick.com/speedY/0 ... e+btvb.mp3
can U guys give me some feedback http://streamer.soundclick.com/speedY/0 ... e+btvb.mp3
Last edited by kjargaard2005 on Thu Aug 25, 2005 8:31 pm, edited 3 times in total.
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- KVRer
- Topic Starter
- 4 posts since 28 Aug, 2004
come one people, give me some feedback 
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- AcousticHippie
- 4525 posts since 12 Mar, 2003
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- KVRAF
- 2123 posts since 29 Mar, 2004 from Lincolnshire, UK
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- KVRAF
- 1955 posts since 5 Sep, 2003 from Denmark
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- KVRer
- Topic Starter
- 4 posts since 28 Aug, 2004
the link is fixed, and working
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- AcousticHippie
- 4525 posts since 12 Mar, 2003
the beginning is nice... and the pulsating beat is cool... I don't like 4 on the floor's though... but that doesn't mean yours is bad for people who do.... the hihat could have been a different sample... it's a bit boring... maybe use a real hihat with several velocity layers...
and the dupbidupbidub melody which is going on doesn't please my ears too much.. but again this maybe due to me not liking this style of music...
but apart from that it's quite nice..... maybe one more thing.. maybe congruent melodies for the strings and the piano so that they don't play the same all the time
oh and at 4:12 when all comes back in again... you could try a reverse pad to introduce it all back in again... so that it kinda builts up
and the dupbidupbidub melody which is going on doesn't please my ears too much.. but again this maybe due to me not liking this style of music...
but apart from that it's quite nice..... maybe one more thing.. maybe congruent melodies for the strings and the piano so that they don't play the same all the time
oh and at 4:12 when all comes back in again... you could try a reverse pad to introduce it all back in again... so that it kinda builts up
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- KVRAF
- 2123 posts since 29 Mar, 2004 from Lincolnshire, UK
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- KVRer
- Topic Starter
- 4 posts since 28 Aug, 2004
thank thats feedback I can use, do anybody know how to make it sound more prof. like from a radio or a cd, I feel that the sound is way out to the left and right, to much reverb maybe, but when I remove the reverb it sound like a cheap casio keyboard, I need to get a tight sound, that still got some air "reverb".
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- AcousticHippie
- 4525 posts since 12 Mar, 2003
well usually people want to wide the stereo perception... but you can narrow it down, too of course..... maybe use Moneo for that (look in my sig)
but I would suggest that you start by narrowing down the stereoness of the reverb used.... well you'd have to use reverb as an insert then (I guess not sure about that)
you could also try stuff like chorus for fattening up synth or even a guitar amp simulation... get some dirt in there
but I would suggest that you start by narrowing down the stereoness of the reverb used.... well you'd have to use reverb as an insert then (I guess not sure about that)
you could also try stuff like chorus for fattening up synth or even a guitar amp simulation... get some dirt in there
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- KVRian
- 1442 posts since 30 May, 2005
Hi kjargaard,
The intro is nice. Sounds are OK, but they could be better. Even some EQing should help. Could use some more variation over the long run. Cool for a start.
About the reverb thingy: Try using some delays in combination with less reverb.
All the best, FRitz
The intro is nice. Sounds are OK, but they could be better. Even some EQing should help. Could use some more variation over the long run. Cool for a start.
About the reverb thingy: Try using some delays in combination with less reverb.
All the best, FRitz
In the end will be the word.
Check out some of my music at www.fritzmetal.de
Check out some of my music at www.fritzmetal.de
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- KVRist
- 383 posts since 11 Apr, 2004 from Midlands
Good first effort, it sounds like you completed the arrangement you were after, there's always a hundred different variations and tweaks you could have performed but just move forward and enjoy learning and arranging!!
