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Final Act [Plunk} New Cut
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- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 6596 posts since 21 Jun, 2004 from Secret Underground Hideout
Last edited by androidlove on Sat Sep 17, 2005 5:34 am, edited 1 time in total.
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- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 6596 posts since 21 Jun, 2004 from Secret Underground Hideout
thanx tuz. it's cool you can still recognize this tune as my music. i did things a little differently this time.
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- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 6596 posts since 21 Jun, 2004 from Secret Underground Hideout
new cut up. a little thicker
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- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 6596 posts since 21 Jun, 2004 from Secret Underground Hideout
bump
just keepin my head above water
not many ppl care for plunk rock?
i've put a new version up
i'm willin to re-mix with yer expert guidance
just keepin my head above water
not many ppl care for plunk rock?
i've put a new version up
i'm willin to re-mix with yer expert guidance
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- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 6596 posts since 21 Jun, 2004 from Secret Underground Hideout
why not listen? it's plunk! this is good music with attitude. it's what you need to keep from becoming a fat, wrinkled, boring conformist. this music will help you to not abuse and neglect. it will show you how to socialize with random individuals. best of all....it's free!
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- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 6596 posts since 21 Jun, 2004 from Secret Underground Hideout
thanx man
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- KVRist
- 211 posts since 27 Feb, 2005
Hi I'm listening to the track now. I like the songwriting, it's quite catchy.
The mix sounds very muffled through my headphones... is this the final version? I downloaded it from the 1st post on the Auditorium thread, since I didn't see any other links in the thread.
I agree that the snare needs to be sent up front.
Some criticisms: it seems that the song is in a key that's too low for the singer's register. Also, the bass could use some more spanking, right now it sounds too polite. Just my opinion of course. Is the bassist playing with his fingers?
I like the sound of the guitar, are you doing some type of double tracking?
All in all a nice track, keep it up!
The mix sounds very muffled through my headphones... is this the final version? I downloaded it from the 1st post on the Auditorium thread, since I didn't see any other links in the thread.
I agree that the snare needs to be sent up front.
Some criticisms: it seems that the song is in a key that's too low for the singer's register. Also, the bass could use some more spanking, right now it sounds too polite. Just my opinion of course. Is the bassist playing with his fingers?
I like the sound of the guitar, are you doing some type of double tracking?
All in all a nice track, keep it up!
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- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 6596 posts since 21 Jun, 2004 from Secret Underground Hideout
this is the second one i posted (final act 2). i'm still learning to mix and masterHernan wrote:The mix sounds very muffled through my headphones... is this the final version? I downloaded it from the 1st post on the Auditorium thread, since I didn't see any other links in the thread.
it was way in back. number 2 brought it up more. i'd rather have the snare on par. i used a a sf kit on this one instead of layered drums each having their own track. i thought i'd see if i could save some time. the snare is too bright. that may be holding me back. i'll use a darker snare on my next mixdown. (i like the sound of those huge chicago marching snares)I agree that the snare needs to be sent up front.
actually, my voice goes deeper than that (you should hear my elvis)Some criticisms: it seems that the song is in a key that's too low for the singer's register.
the bassist is a soundfont. i'm having no luck finding band membersAlso, the bass could use some more spanking, right now it sounds too polite. Just my opinion of course. Is the bassist playing with his fingers?
the guitar is all one pass. there's some chorus on itI like the sound of the guitar, are you doing some type of double tracking?
thanxAll in all a nice track, keep it up!
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- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 6596 posts since 21 Jun, 2004 from Secret Underground Hideout
i just got through remixin it. i noticed i have voxengo's stereo touch on the guitar (tryin sumpin new) that may be why it sounds doubled to you. i've changed the drums and gone back to my old fave eq (i tried a few new things in this song)
in a few days i'll have a page at mixposure with 6 tunes (1 exclusive
). the link will be in my sig
in a few days i'll have a page at mixposure with 6 tunes (1 exclusive
). the link will be in my sig-
- KVRist
- 211 posts since 27 Feb, 2005
Wow! I would have never imagined it was all programmed. Sounds 100% played live. Great drum programming BTW.
Maybe for the bass you may want to use one of these soundfonts that have both up and downstrokes.
Maybe for the bass you may want to use one of these soundfonts that have both up and downstrokes.
