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Not sure yet about this one :?

http://www.artistlaunch.com/artists/son ... Crawls.mp3

Any comments on what works, and more importantly, what doesn't would be most appreciated. I hope it sounds somewhat alright as-is so far though!

Cheers.

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Like what you did at 4:30 with the higher arpeggios. I might have put some pad behind the earlier arpeggios, just for experimenting.

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I thought this was really neat. The sounds remind me of old video games, hehe.

I'm not so sure about the guitar, though. It's either too loud or doesn't fit. I think it's too loud.

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Thanks for the critiques...

Ildon: Whoa! I hope the guitar fits... It's kinda the foundation for the entire first half of the track! :? I can see about maybe compressing some of the upper frequencies though... they may be a little shrill...

Migal: Yeah... I did some experimenting with backing pads for the first half of the track, but there's too much going on already... I couldn't seem to find any room in the spectrum. I do notice that the legato bass synth is far too strong for the first half though, so if I quiet that out a little (or a lot), maybe I'd have some extra space to play with...

Thanks again for listening, and sharing your thoughts.

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