A work in progress...
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- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 2327 posts since 13 Apr, 2004 from Vancouver, Canada
Not sure yet about this one
http://www.artistlaunch.com/artists/son ... Crawls.mp3
Any comments on what works, and more importantly, what doesn't would be most appreciated. I hope it sounds somewhat alright as-is so far though!
Cheers.
http://www.artistlaunch.com/artists/son ... Crawls.mp3
Any comments on what works, and more importantly, what doesn't would be most appreciated. I hope it sounds somewhat alright as-is so far though!
Cheers.
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- KVRist
- 53 posts since 25 Aug, 2005 from Phoenix
Like what you did at 4:30 with the higher arpeggios. I might have put some pad behind the earlier arpeggios, just for experimenting.
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- KVRAF
- 3158 posts since 2 Jul, 2005 from Stuck in the closet
I thought this was really neat. The sounds remind me of old video games, hehe.
I'm not so sure about the guitar, though. It's either too loud or doesn't fit. I think it's too loud.
I'm not so sure about the guitar, though. It's either too loud or doesn't fit. I think it's too loud.
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- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 2327 posts since 13 Apr, 2004 from Vancouver, Canada
Thanks for the critiques...
Ildon: Whoa! I hope the guitar fits... It's kinda the foundation for the entire first half of the track! I can see about maybe compressing some of the upper frequencies though... they may be a little shrill...
Migal: Yeah... I did some experimenting with backing pads for the first half of the track, but there's too much going on already... I couldn't seem to find any room in the spectrum. I do notice that the legato bass synth is far too strong for the first half though, so if I quiet that out a little (or a lot), maybe I'd have some extra space to play with...
Thanks again for listening, and sharing your thoughts.
Ildon: Whoa! I hope the guitar fits... It's kinda the foundation for the entire first half of the track! I can see about maybe compressing some of the upper frequencies though... they may be a little shrill...
Migal: Yeah... I did some experimenting with backing pads for the first half of the track, but there's too much going on already... I couldn't seem to find any room in the spectrum. I do notice that the legato bass synth is far too strong for the first half though, so if I quiet that out a little (or a lot), maybe I'd have some extra space to play with...
Thanks again for listening, and sharing your thoughts.