Helpfull ears needed... Progressive'ish track...'ish

[Kaih]

Hello

Have worked on this for far too long, and I am about to chuck it... Can't stand it anymore

Would be very gratefull if some of you could listen to this, as i have no idea how to develop it further.


GET ON WITH IT!!

ok...

http://s24.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=1VTO ... 05B19TBKIN

Time: 3.07 minutes
Bitrate: 192 Kbps MP3
File: 4.29 MB
Mix: Very rough...

Enjoy/Loathe

[Kaih]

Just read the Rules, I see i forgot to rename filename/ID3... Sorry

[sonarman]

I Like it... I think.
Leave it as it is and move on to the next track.

[Kaih]

Thank you sir, i think...

[Kaih]

Maybe i should have taken that course in marketing...

[Kaih]