Sea and Rain
is the title
mix almost finished, does it works for you?
http://www.dashsignature.com/mp3/Sea_and_Rain.mp3
thanks
new Chill Ambient Melodic track, please comment
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- DASH Guy
- Topic Starter
- 7951 posts since 20 Sep, 2001
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- KVRAF
- 6895 posts since 9 Mar, 2003 from the bridge of sighs
perhaps some selective eq req'd ...
wouldn't change much else ...
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- KVRAF
- 2861 posts since 3 May, 2003 from Germany
I like it 
Very good lite/smooth arrangement it has. Overall it has a happy desciptive feeling (when I'm imaging the sea and the rain while hearing
How about adding vocals
But it's ok as it is (vocals mostly open other dimensions, maybe here's enough dimension)
Very good lite/smooth arrangement it has. Overall it has a happy desciptive feeling (when I'm imaging the sea and the rain while hearing
How about adding vocals
But it's ok as it is (vocals mostly open other dimensions, maybe here's enough dimension)
Symphony Nr.1
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music has become meaningless...we just keep doing it
Meet the Cities Repair Team Unimportant laughter
music has become meaningless...we just keep doing it
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- KVRist
- 192 posts since 27 Sep, 2004
Nice and mellow. I liked your melody.
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- KVRist
- 172 posts since 31 Mar, 2004 from harrisburg, pa
very nice! i really like that lead synth sound.
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- KVRAF
- 3724 posts since 30 Jan, 2005 from rochester, ny
nice! like the sounds, beat, melody, chord changes.
coupla suggestions:
- the mix is very low-frequency dominant, dark. you don't want to lose this, since it creates a great mood. but what about boosting the mid-high range a bit for definition ... somewhere between 2000 and 5000 hz? it would especially help brighten up the drums.
- i would like to hear more amplitude envelope for the lead synth. a swell into the notes, a decay through them, something like that.
rachMiel
coupla suggestions:
- the mix is very low-frequency dominant, dark. you don't want to lose this, since it creates a great mood. but what about boosting the mid-high range a bit for definition ... somewhere between 2000 and 5000 hz? it would especially help brighten up the drums.
- i would like to hear more amplitude envelope for the lead synth. a swell into the notes, a decay through them, something like that.
rachMiel
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- DASH Guy
- Topic Starter
- 7951 posts since 20 Sep, 2001
many thanks,normal wrote:
perhaps some selective eq req'd ...
wouldn't change much else ...
eq=will do
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- DASH Guy
- Topic Starter
- 7951 posts since 20 Sep, 2001
thanks thomekk, vocals may be nice but as you saythomekk wrote:I like it
Very good lite/smooth arrangement it has. Overall it has a happy desciptive feeling (when I'm imaging the sea and the rain while hearing
How about adding vocals
But it's ok as it is (vocals mostly open other dimensions, maybe here's enough dimension)
it's another dimension, no?, <grin>
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- DASH Guy
- Topic Starter
- 7951 posts since 20 Sep, 2001
thanks again everybody
about the envelope on the lead yes I'd add a smoother release at least
will try a different EQ, just I hope it's not a metter of speakers, it is very dark?rachmiel wrote:nice! like the sounds, beat, melody, chord changes.
coupla suggestions:
- the mix is very low-frequency dominant, dark. you don't want to lose this, since it creates a great mood. but what about boosting the mid-high range a bit for definition ... somewhere between 2000 and 5000 hz? it would especially help brighten up the drums.
- i would like to hear more amplitude envelope for the lead synth. a swell into the notes, a decay through them, something like that.
rachMiel
about the envelope on the lead yes I'd add a smoother release at least
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- KVRAF
- 1927 posts since 30 Oct, 2003 from Frolicking in Dirac's Ocean
simply lovely...even on my crapola office speakers...added a bit of je ne sais qua to an otherwise bleak day. Thanks!
