two weeks ago... i hate to call it prog
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- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 1530 posts since 17 Sep, 2002
http://funkylime.panicnow.net/music/fun ... ursday.mp3
some f**ked up song i originally came up with on some crap nylon string guitar in some bizzarre alternate tuning that my mind excreted whilst the psilocybin had her way with me......
eternally unfinished, as to be expected... let me know you hate it
some f**ked up song i originally came up with on some crap nylon string guitar in some bizzarre alternate tuning that my mind excreted whilst the psilocybin had her way with me......
eternally unfinished, as to be expected... let me know you hate it
- AcousticHippie
- 4525 posts since 12 Mar, 2003
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- KVRian
- 534 posts since 31 Mar, 2005 from Tampere, Finland
I'm sorry if I disturb your piece of mind saying that I really like it. Some very nice licks and riffs there.
A guy with serious GAS and lots of unused VSTs. But if I someday need them...
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- KVRAF
- 8388 posts since 11 Apr, 2003 from back on the hillside again - but now with a garden!
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Captainbaseballbatboy Captainbaseballbatboy https://www.kvraudio.com/forum/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=80962
- KVRer
- 3 posts since 12 Sep, 2005 from Netherlands
Hi,
i'm pretty new to this forum (in writing post, have been reading for a while) so i hope you don't mind me giving my opinion, but i like it. Good tune to wake up on (what i'm doing right now)
greetings
i'm pretty new to this forum (in writing post, have been reading for a while) so i hope you don't mind me giving my opinion, but i like it. Good tune to wake up on (what i'm doing right now)
greetings
- AcousticHippie
- 4525 posts since 12 Mar, 2003
well tbh honest I didn't listen - he didn't tell me to.... but he told me to let him know I hate it.. which I did... I guess
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- KVRist
- 120 posts since 10 Mar, 2003 from Scarborough. UK.
Sorry to disappoint you funky lime, but I enjoyed this. Only comment would be is to take the guitar back a little in the mix and bring everything else forward, to me this would balance the sound out a little better.
The end is sudden, this must be where you inspiration stops eh? Bring the dreamy secion back in here with a melody derived from the solo synth in the section after the dreamy bit (the synth needs to be a lot louder there by the way) and then fetch the initial guitar chords back after this with a developed rhythm and a tune over it that continues in the same style as the new one you have put over the dreamy section. Add a small coda and finish.
Just my thoughts, but it might get you a little further.
The end is sudden, this must be where you inspiration stops eh? Bring the dreamy secion back in here with a melody derived from the solo synth in the section after the dreamy bit (the synth needs to be a lot louder there by the way) and then fetch the initial guitar chords back after this with a developed rhythm and a tune over it that continues in the same style as the new one you have put over the dreamy section. Add a small coda and finish.
Just my thoughts, but it might get you a little further.
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- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 1530 posts since 17 Sep, 2002
thanks for the comments everyone, even the ones who hate it
yeah the mix is kinda crappy, did it on some $7 headphones and i havent been bothered to do a better job (not that I really can with my $20 computer speakers anyway)
i might have a go at finishing this later... gotta get ready to go to my dead end job for now.
yeah the mix is kinda crappy, did it on some $7 headphones and i havent been bothered to do a better job (not that I really can with my $20 computer speakers anyway)
i might have a go at finishing this later... gotta get ready to go to my dead end job for now.
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- KVRAF
- 8072 posts since 12 Dec, 2003 from Canada