Feed Some Need Back - Gridlocked&Mully
- AcousticHippie
- Topic Starter
- 4525 posts since 12 Mar, 2003
heya...
so Gridlocked and me we have been working on this little ditty called "The positive way of negative thinking" and we'd like some feedback on it in order to carry on..... I myself have lost perspective on this song don't know if I hate or love it (prolly hate it cuz I couldn't get the vocals right - and love the music)
well I just don't know... give us your thoughts please
http://www.multree.com/mp3/Mudlocked.mp3
bare in mind though... this is not finished.... and not mastered....
thanks very much
mully
so Gridlocked and me we have been working on this little ditty called "The positive way of negative thinking" and we'd like some feedback on it in order to carry on..... I myself have lost perspective on this song don't know if I hate or love it (prolly hate it cuz I couldn't get the vocals right - and love the music)
well I just don't know... give us your thoughts please
http://www.multree.com/mp3/Mudlocked.mp3
bare in mind though... this is not finished.... and not mastered....
thanks very much
mully
- AcousticHippie
- Topic Starter
- 4525 posts since 12 Mar, 2003
yeah could be a cool song name.....
listening to the song again made me realized the vocals are slightly too late - Gav has fixed that already but cannot bounce it down right now - so keep that in mind when saying... "hey your vocalist has a shitty timing"
listening to the song again made me realized the vocals are slightly too late - Gav has fixed that already but cannot bounce it down right now - so keep that in mind when saying... "hey your vocalist has a shitty timing"
- AcousticHippie
- Topic Starter
- 4525 posts since 12 Mar, 2003
you thiefclueless wrote:...and/or lyric. my thoughts exactly! (scribble scribble).multree wrote:yeah could be a cool song name.....
at least give me credit
-
- KVRian
- 1443 posts since 27 Dec, 2003
"Get yourself a dog" ...
Sounds pretty good, not your default speed I know so it's interesting to hear you trying some new styles. Very mellow and introspective. I'm assuming Gridlocked did the music and you did the vox? It could use a manic orchestral stab or a bit more of a crescendo somewhere just to contrast with the mellowness, to pull it up out of the wallowing only to sink into it again.
Sounds pretty good, not your default speed I know so it's interesting to hear you trying some new styles. Very mellow and introspective. I'm assuming Gridlocked did the music and you did the vox? It could use a manic orchestral stab or a bit more of a crescendo somewhere just to contrast with the mellowness, to pull it up out of the wallowing only to sink into it again.
-
- The Teach
- 8273 posts since 23 Jul, 2002 from flatness
only just seen this thread ... and there was me thinking you were all clever-clever ...clueless wrote:...and/or lyric. my thoughts exactly! (scribble scribble).multree wrote:yeah could be a cool song name.....
(shouldve known better i guess)
slainte rob
- AcousticHippie
- Topic Starter
- 4525 posts since 12 Mar, 2003
mn wrote:"Get yourself a dog" ...
Sounds pretty good, not your default speed I know so it's interesting to hear you trying some new styles. Very mellow and introspective. I'm assuming Gridlocked did the music and you did the vox? It could use a manic orchestral stab or a bit more of a crescendo somewhere just to contrast with the mellowness, to pull it up out of the wallowing only to sink into it again.
yup music is Gridlocked, lyrics and voice are mine
I'm really glad about the way the lyrics turned out - the dog line should be missinterpreted though... it's okay to have a dog
- AcousticHippie
- Topic Starter
- 4525 posts since 12 Mar, 2003
pHz wrote:only just seen this thread ... and there was me thinking you were all clever-clever ...clueless wrote:...and/or lyric. my thoughts exactly! (scribble scribble).multree wrote:yeah could be a cool song name.....
(shouldve known better i guess)
slainte rob
-
- The Teach
- 8273 posts since 23 Jul, 2002 from flatness
you know ??? ... i have NO idea why you fins that funny mully ...
slainte rob
slainte rob