Collaboration wanted - Hard Rock

[slh]

Hi.

I've thrown up a couple of songs here that I think have some potential.

They are working copies so I've only bothered mixing them well enough to create the feel of the songs. Actually, the final versions would be totally re-recorded anyway.

They both have verse's but need some help with chorus's.

"Goin' out" goes from verse 1 into verse 2 with a half arsed attempt at a chorus at the end of verse 2 - but I think the chorus is pretty lame - so feel free to suggest something else.

(you may need to cut and paste these links as I don't think they will work in this format)(Update: fixed name so should be able to work directly from this page now)

http://www.iinet.net.au/~wlh/sh/GoinOut-VI.mp3

http://www.iinet.net.au/~wlh/sh/flangeryv5.mp3

Anyone interested please email or PM me - thanks for taking the time have a listen. If it matters at all, I'm using Protools 7.

[multree]

try putting a % in the blankspace

wait let me try it
http://www.iinet.net.au/~wlh/sh/Goin%Out-VI.mp3

http://www.iinet.net.au/~wlh/sh/flangery%v5.mp3

[multree]

damn didn't work.... sorry

[bluedad]

yeah, you need to rename them or something..no luck here at all

[multree]

http://members.iinet.com.au/~wlh/sh/Goin%20Out-VI.mp3

http://www.iinet.net.au/~wlh/sh/flangery%20v5.mp3

[multree]

see that worked... so a blank space is %20 not just %

[slh]

try putting a % in the blankspace

wait let me try it
http://www.iinet.net.au/~wlh/sh/Goin%Out-VI.mp3

http://www.iinet.net.au/~wlh/sh/flangery%v5.mp3

Thanks for the try - but I've fixed it properly in the original post now. Sorry for the stuff up.

cheers

[slh]

yeah, you need to rename them or something..no luck here at all

Sorry about that - here's the repaired links. Thanks again.

http://www.iinet.net.au/~wlh/sh/GoinOut-VI.mp3

http://www.iinet.net.au/~wlh/sh/flangeryv5.mp3