Aye!!
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- KVRer
- Topic Starter
- 23 posts since 29 Mar, 2006
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- KVRer
- Topic Starter
- 23 posts since 29 Mar, 2006
Bump. Any comments/suggestions for this one?
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oddbods finger oddbods finger https://www.kvraudio.com/forum/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=55496
- KVRian
- 779 posts since 21 Jan, 2005 from The Vale of Eden
Good sounds...voice, drums, guitars
starts off quite laid back and dreamy.
The only thing I can't really get to grips with is the structure.
There's a 1 repeated chorus and what seems like another chorus, but no verses and several instrumental parts..intro/bridge/ending.
It somehow doesn't come across as a complete song.
Good stuff though
starts off quite laid back and dreamy.
The only thing I can't really get to grips with is the structure.
There's a 1 repeated chorus and what seems like another chorus, but no verses and several instrumental parts..intro/bridge/ending.
It somehow doesn't come across as a complete song.
Good stuff though
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- KVRer
- Topic Starter
- 23 posts since 29 Mar, 2006
Hi Oddbods, thanks for reviewing!:)
With most of my songs, i keep the lyrics down to a minimum which is why there seems to be no verse etc.
Researching, I realized people get the message quicker and more effectively if i say less.
The "verse" in this song is the part that has no drums.
The second time it comes in there are no lyrics.
I know what you mean about "incomplete" though. I get that with some of Lenny Kravitz stuff sometimes.
Glad you enjoyed the song overall.
With most of my songs, i keep the lyrics down to a minimum which is why there seems to be no verse etc.
Researching, I realized people get the message quicker and more effectively if i say less.
The "verse" in this song is the part that has no drums.
The second time it comes in there are no lyrics.
I know what you mean about "incomplete" though. I get that with some of Lenny Kravitz stuff sometimes.
Glad you enjoyed the song overall.
