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So far I like this piano line. Also, the song is very heartfelt, I like that too. It's starting to remind me of some simon and garfunkel type stuff. I like the chorus part as well, very beautiful music you got here.

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Nice arrangement here. I like the piano sequence a lot. The strings that enter at the half-way mark really add some fullness to the track (in a good way :wink: ).

I'm not overly keen on the lyrics, but hey, I'm mostly bitter and jaded when it comes to the topic of love and longing. I like your voice though. (This might sound strange, but I swear I've heard your voice before. In one of the monthly contests or something maybe? It sounds so strangely familiar). Nice vocal harmonising too by the way.

Beautiful little outro, although I'd have liked it to be another measure or two longer. :)

Nice one.

Cheers.

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Vocals and piano are cool, but I think you should correct guitar strumming pattern. Very nice melody too.
Respect

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