KVR Audio

Reverse Engineer · Post by **Reverse Engineer** » Sat Jun 03, 2006 8:24 pm

I really quite liked this. It reminded me a little of glasstown. For some reason i was expecting a bassline but it never came, the vocals are strong and stand out really well in the mix, nice track overall.

Edited because i'm dumb.

justjazz · Post by **justjazz** » Sat Jun 03, 2006 8:35 pm

Reverse Engineer · Post by **Reverse Engineer** » Sat Jun 03, 2006 8:40 pm

justjazz wrote:I think it could use some bass - you are right.

Not sure where the deharmonised parts are (do you mean dissonant? just sounds bad?). Which sections?

I've edited my first post

I was listening to a few tracks i downloaded and got mixed up there.

justjazz · Post by **justjazz** » Sat Jun 03, 2006 8:44 pm

advaya · Post by **advaya** » Sat Jun 03, 2006 8:50 pm

Your pretty good at that whole singing thing.

I like this one a lot! Vocals sound great (and the harmonising is tops).

A keeper.

Cheers.

Watto · Post by **Watto** » Sat Jun 03, 2006 11:08 pm

Hey justjazz,

I'm thinking your name rules this out, but have you ever listened to any Muse? Some parts of this could definitely go in that direction...

Watto · Post by **Watto** » Sat Jun 03, 2006 11:09 pm

(would you mind me doing a version Muse-style...?)

justjazz · Post by **justjazz** » Sun Jun 04, 2006 1:25 am

Watto · Post by **Watto** » Sun Jun 04, 2006 1:28 am

Oh, and that's a bump

Eric Bourne · Post by **Eric Bourne** » Sun Jun 04, 2006 1:44 am

This is really cool, reminds me of McCartney a lot. I like the arrangement, but feel the bass is too understated.

The "I'll be behind you" lyric is off-putting though. It has too much of a stalker/sexual-predator vibe to it.

justjazz · Post by **justjazz** » Sun Jun 04, 2006 1:46 am

JustJ · Post by **JustJ** » Sun Jun 04, 2006 9:39 am

WOW, What a feeling

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This one sounds just great! At first the guitar at 0:29 sounds a bit strange,
but after some time it fits in the mix just perfect.
And your Voice is really great.
So overall Great tune.

justjazz · Post by **justjazz** » Sun Jun 04, 2006 6:17 pm

Ildon · Post by **Ildon** » Sun Jun 04, 2006 7:20 pm

I love the singing.

I agree with others... lots of feeling, and it sounds professional. There's not a thing about it I don't like.

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