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ATS · Post by **ATS** » Thu Jul 13, 2006 6:58 pm

but seriously I hope some people get some enjoyment out of it.

hi-fi: http://www.soundclick.com/util/streamm3 ... 83415&q=hi

lo-fi: http://www.soundclick.com/util/streamm3 ... 83415&q=lo

D-Fusion · Post by **D-Fusion** » Thu Jul 13, 2006 7:31 pm

Nice tune

I like it alot but it sounds more like Eurodance then Trance

Have we been at Vipzone and hunted down some vocals

Anyway it is a very nice and chilled tune you got there, and a very good production wich i really enjoyed to listen to

Keep up the good work

Lance · Post by **Lance** » Thu Jul 13, 2006 7:38 pm

Have you ever heard e.g. a Ferry Corsten (System F) track? Or a PvD, or an ATB track?

I wouldn't say your tracks are bad, but they are far from trance.

Sorry folks, but it seems to me US residents can't make trance music [at high level].

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vi90G7kmnq8

ATS · Post by **ATS** » Thu Jul 13, 2006 8:16 pm

D-Fusion wrote:Nice tune
I like it alot but it sounds more like Eurodance then Trance
Have we been at Vipzone and hunted down some vocals

Anyway it is a very nice and chilled tune you got there, and a very good production wich i really enjoyed to listen to

Keep up the good work

I changed the genre to dance on my site. It think you are right. Yup bought the vocals at VIP

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ATS · Post by **ATS** » Thu Jul 13, 2006 8:18 pm

ATS · Post by **ATS** » Sat Jul 15, 2006 4:58 am

anyone else have any comments, suggestions whatever? I'm bored...

PhaseShift · Post by **PhaseShift** » Sat Jul 15, 2006 5:31 am

Very nice track!, like it a lot. Good mix & composition.
Maybe I'll post one of my tracks sometime

emdot_ambient · Post by **emdot_ambient** » Sat Jul 15, 2006 5:39 am

Yeah, I'm not hip on the nuainces of genre, but I wouldn't have called this Tarnce. Not really sure what it is, but it's a little too sing-songy. Not that this is necessarily bad.

But as for critique . . . you need to put about 10 tons more balls in that kick drum. And it needs a much stronger bass, this one's kind of tame, more like a JM Jarre bass sample thing. If you want it more in a Tarnce vein, replace the bass with something more synthetic and with more guts. Because of these two things, the mix is way too skewed in the mid-high ranges.

Pretty melodies and synth arpeggio frills, the rest of the mix seems fine.

Oh . . . and for real Tarnce, don't you need a few 303 lines in there? Don't hear anything like that.

And since we're on the topic of not Tarnce . . . I posted some Rebirth songs here awhile ago. Old tunes and absolutely no polish but I still like some of them just on the compositional side.

Windschatten · Post by **Windschatten** » Sat Jul 15, 2006 12:12 pm

Great song! I don't care if it's not trance. My only critique: sometimes the echo of the singer is a little big extreme. But how have you done the singing? Are these samples or selfmade? =)

Ildon · Post by **Ildon** » Sat Jul 15, 2006 12:33 pm

I agree 100% with emdot_ambient. I can barely hear the kick.

<genrepolice>This actually sounds more like synthpop than trance.</genrepolice>

Cool melodies. Cool beats.

I like the ending. Fades out to nothing. Lets you down easily.

_starcraft_ · Post by **_starcraft_** » Sat Jul 15, 2006 12:54 pm

really nice eurodance tune.
sweet.

ATS · Post by **ATS** » Sat Jul 15, 2006 11:45 pm

The bass is a little "smoother" and the drums are a little louder. The piano has more bottom end and is fuller. I raised the colume of the piano and the vocals a little bit. I also tones down the highs on two of the instruments because they were a little too uhh well high . mm I think that is it. I am filing this one away as complete and off to make another. Thanks so much you all!

as far as the kick screw it I don't care about having a big kick. Big kicks are getting out of hand

anyhow thanks so much for the feedback.

emumk6 · Post by **emumk6** » Sun Jul 16, 2006 12:14 am

Just where did tarnce come from? And bump?......

ATS · Post by **ATS** » Sun Jul 16, 2006 2:08 am

emumk6 wrote:Just where did tarnce come from? And bump?......

I think it stems from someone misspelling it on here and it just caught on. Someone correct me if I am wrong?

camsr · Post by **camsr** » Sun Jul 16, 2006 2:33 am

I am now in a tarnce.

nice melodies and vocals are pretty. Kate Lesing huh? Is that for the "remix competition"?

I cant even hear the kick, why?

Did a Tarnce song