I've gotten a track here that I'm putting on my trance album i'm working on. I wasn't going to show anybody till the album was done but I figured... what the hell, maybe you guys can help me improve on it.
Here it is, in all it's glory (yet another tarnce track)
www.moosealert.com/ChicagoRain.mp3
A Chicago Rain - Calmer Trance
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NotTheCommonDose NotTheCommonDose https://www.kvraudio.com/forum/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=107520
- KVRian
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- 792 posts since 16 May, 2006 from Oswego/Babylon NY
Last edited by NotTheCommonDose on Sun Jul 16, 2006 9:34 pm, edited 5 times in total.
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- KVRAF
- 3158 posts since 2 Jul, 2005 from Stuck in the closet
Kind of a darker sound. Cool. There isn't much I can comment on really, since I've never written a trance tune. I'd say it's good, but there's definitely room for improvement in your production sound and with your samples.
Mizutaphile.
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NotTheCommonDose NotTheCommonDose https://www.kvraudio.com/forum/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=107520
- KVRian
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- 792 posts since 16 May, 2006 from Oswego/Babylon NY
Thanks guys, I was glad for a quick reply. And as usual I'm always glad to hear from you Ildon. Thanks again.
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NotTheCommonDose NotTheCommonDose https://www.kvraudio.com/forum/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=107520
- KVRian
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- 792 posts since 16 May, 2006 from Oswego/Babylon NY
btw, before I consider the song finished, could anyone else take a listen?
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- addled muppet weed
- 105855 posts since 26 Jan, 2003 from through the looking glass
im sure you can guess trance isnt really my thing so as a taste thing its not really grabbing me...
that aside i do know the genre enough to be able to comment that this seems to be a good example of the genre. builds in all the right places and seems "tight" enough to me.
if i was still into pills and clubbin id probably be on the floor for this
that aside i do know the genre enough to be able to comment that this seems to be a good example of the genre. builds in all the right places and seems "tight" enough to me.
if i was still into pills and clubbin id probably be on the floor for this
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- KVRAF
- 4669 posts since 26 Sep, 2005 from U.A.E
Bass is good, nice and dark tone to it.
Pad sound has enough bite
and the build and drops are sweet.
but the drums clinch the deal.
nice one, proper good.
peace.
Pad sound has enough bite
and the build and drops are sweet.
but the drums clinch the deal.
nice one, proper good.
peace.
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NotTheCommonDose NotTheCommonDose https://www.kvraudio.com/forum/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=107520
- KVRian
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- 792 posts since 16 May, 2006 from Oswego/Babylon NY
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- KVRian
- 889 posts since 10 Jul, 2004
sorry but the production on this track is all wrong.
the kick is too hollow and hardly kicks through the mix.
you got a lot to learn...this tune is not up to todays standards.
compare you track to music u like in your mp3 player and appreciate the differences.
the melody and composition is also extremely banal.
the kick is too hollow and hardly kicks through the mix.
you got a lot to learn...this tune is not up to todays standards.
compare you track to music u like in your mp3 player and appreciate the differences.
the melody and composition is also extremely banal.
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- KVRian
- 1167 posts since 4 Sep, 2003
......errr.....in your oppinion_starcraft_ wrote:sorry but the production on this track is all wrong.
the kick is too hollow and hardly kicks through the mix.
you got a lot to learn...this tune is not up to todays standards.
compare you track to music u like in your mp3 player and appreciate the differences.
the melody and composition is also extremely banal.
Anyway, I enjoyed it and found none of the above points to be true.
By way of constructive critisism, the break at 03.00 seemed a little empty to me
