Metal song.. named System failure...I need Help!
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 36 posts since 19 Jul, 2006
Hi.
This is my new song named System Failure.
I am on vacations, so took my guitar, a old laptop and start recording only with the beach on my sight and start composing
I have no pre amp here only the BFD XFL DVDS, Cubase SX3, laptop and guitar.
Is missing some musical composition technics that i dont apply yet and i dont do any mixing.
I will aprecciate some tips about the mix, since i will not change anything on parts already recorded.... only when i return to my home and start recording lyrics
http://brohymn.com.sapo.pt/Systemfailure.mp3
PS: Sorry that short fade on the end
Sorry my bad english.
This is my new song named System Failure.
I am on vacations, so took my guitar, a old laptop and start recording only with the beach on my sight and start composing
I have no pre amp here only the BFD XFL DVDS, Cubase SX3, laptop and guitar.
Is missing some musical composition technics that i dont apply yet and i dont do any mixing.
I will aprecciate some tips about the mix, since i will not change anything on parts already recorded.... only when i return to my home and start recording lyrics
http://brohymn.com.sapo.pt/Systemfailure.mp3
PS: Sorry that short fade on the end
Sorry my bad english.
- KVRAF
- 10234 posts since 17 Sep, 2004 from Austin, TX
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 36 posts since 19 Jul, 2006
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- KVRAF
- 2336 posts since 13 Oct, 2002 from Terra Firma
The production sounds really good. Drums are fresh and there's lot's of variation. The guitar tone and playing are excellent and fit right into the track. The composition isn't that distinct melody wise so my suggestion is to speed up the song, add some vocals and maybe introduce a verse/chorus structure.
It's amazing what can be done with just a laptop and guitar these days.
It's amazing what can be done with just a laptop and guitar these days.
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 36 posts since 19 Jul, 2006
Thanks!
Yeah i know... but Structure is not defined yet because i need the vocals first MAybe a A - B - A - C - B struture. I have study music composition classical and rock (Music schools) but im on vacations and i just want to relax
Yeah i know... but Structure is not defined yet because i need the vocals first MAybe a A - B - A - C - B struture. I have study music composition classical and rock (Music schools) but im on vacations and i just want to relax
- KVRAF
- 10234 posts since 17 Sep, 2004 from Austin, TX
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 36 posts since 19 Jul, 2006
no way... lol i have the feeling but not the voice MY band singer will do the job otherwise we kill him.
Here is another version... http://brohymn.com.sapo.pt/SystemfailureA.mp3
Maybe a mix of both
Here is another version... http://brohymn.com.sapo.pt/SystemfailureA.mp3
Maybe a mix of both
- KVRAF
- 10234 posts since 17 Sep, 2004 from Austin, TX