Yayyy! Finished a different new song - part two

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I normally get stuck about halfway through a 4 minute song (which is why the Cafe contests are ideal... :wink: ) but I finally managed to complete a new song called 'Patterns In The Sky'. I'd love to get some feedback from you all on it.

Edit:I've completed a second song, called 'Patterns In Liquids'. Again, if you've got some time, I'd love to get some feedback. It's in the same place as Patterns In The Sky, so the directions underneath still apply... :-) Btw., although it's probably easiest to access it via MySpace, I've got them also uploaded to my normal webspace: Marc JX8P's musicEnd of edit

You can hear it on my MySpace, just go to http://www.myspace.com/marcjx8p and click in the player to the above right on 'Patterns In The Sky'. I'm sorry for not posting a direct link, but my current host is hosting my Cafe contest entry and I'm not sure how much download bandwidth it offers. It should be possible to download the mp3 though by clicking 'Download' in said player.

Anyway, hope you all enjoy it!
Last edited by Marc JX8P on Sun Aug 20, 2006 12:30 am, edited 4 times in total.
"...Everything we see or seem is but a dream, within a dream."
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Very nice Marc...

Beautiful sweeping pads in there. And the bass line sounds really epic. I love the organ solo at the half-way mark. This is very reminiscent of Amethystium, which is a very good thing.

Production sounds pretty good. My only complaint would be the bit of piano at the begining. It fits the composition, but it sounds really boomy... a bit too much bottom on it.

Other than that, a very relaxing piece of music.

Cheers.

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Thanks! Glad you like it, I'm pretty pleased with the organ solo myself; I'm not really an organ player but I love these roaring hammond solos so this is really me trying to impersonate an organ player... I agree on the piano, I may have to go back and fix a few small things like that.
"...Everything we see or seem is but a dream, within a dream."
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Kind of reminds me of a bunch of movie scores mixed into 1..
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Lagrange wrote:Kind of reminds me of a bunch of movie scores mixed into 1..
... Which is something you've never known could sound so good? :wink:
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A bit smooth and arpy for me personally Marc, but a well produced track, good composition and some outstanding sounds. I enjoyed it! Congrats!
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Thanks! Yes I know, I have arpeggiator addiction :) ... everything just sounds so cool when I plug them in. But I'm trying to cut down. The smoothness aspect is something I think I will never be able to get out of my sound. I sometimes try and get a harsh, edgy sound but somehow it always veers in the direction of Clannad...
"...Everything we see or seem is but a dream, within a dream."
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Wow that song sounds really nice.
You have some great tones and again the overall compostion is good.
I didnt see a problem with the arps but then again im a bit of an addict for them :)

Keep up the good work.
Shaun-o-Matic.

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Thanks, glad you like it! I'm happy to know there is a fellow arp-addict... :)
"...Everything we see or seem is but a dream, within a dream."
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I went to your myspace, listened to your newest track Patterns in the sky and just had to add you.
Your music is just beautiful, Marc. Just my kind of thing, really. :love:
I hope you accept me as a friend! :D
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Thanks! I will add you, but I don't see your friend request yet (unless it differs from your KvR name)?
"...Everything we see or seem is but a dream, within a dream."
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Virb: http://www.virb.com/marcjx8p

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:tu: A beautiful music with interesting sounds in the background. The only sound I don't like so much is the organ (needs more dirt, imo).

p.s. Viva el arpinismo! I love good arp-sounds!

Mellarpus
"It dreamed itself along"

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Heh, thanks Mel (just keeping it short)! Glad you like it.
"...Everything we see or seem is but a dream, within a dream."
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I've now completed a second song in this series, called 'Patterns In Liquids'. Again, you can hear it on my MySpace, just go to http://www.myspace.com/marcjx8p and click in the player to the above right on 'Patterns In Liquids', or just goto my website (see link in my first post in this thread). Hope you all enjoy it!
Last edited by Marc JX8P on Sun Aug 20, 2006 12:31 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Bumpity...? :)
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