dekky - the trouble is [new version]
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 426 posts since 23 Apr, 2004 from the people's republic of popistan
uuuh back from the fast song tempo-trip
not really...
thing is david and me we both had a shitty day at work yesterday, so the song we threw together yesterday evening didnt turn out as uptempo as the other new ones do.. more midtempoish this one.
bit of a shitty mix, consider it work in progress .. but fair enough to share i think.
so have a listen , but dont kill yerself
http://www.theyareclean.com/trouble_is.mp3
worked a bit on it:
new version: http://www.theyareclean.com/trouble_is_d.mp3
not really...
thing is david and me we both had a shitty day at work yesterday, so the song we threw together yesterday evening didnt turn out as uptempo as the other new ones do.. more midtempoish this one.
bit of a shitty mix, consider it work in progress .. but fair enough to share i think.
so have a listen , but dont kill yerself
http://www.theyareclean.com/trouble_is.mp3
worked a bit on it:
new version: http://www.theyareclean.com/trouble_is_d.mp3
Last edited by dekky on Fri Sep 01, 2006 1:16 pm, edited 2 times in total.
My Distortion is Analogue...
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LeftoverLasagne LeftoverLasagne https://www.kvraudio.com/forum/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=117605
- KVRist
- 97 posts since 24 Aug, 2006
Hello dear Sir,
the physical moddeled thingy at the beginning is slightly to clean for a "don't kill yerself" song, isn't it.
the vocals are cool and especially the effect underneath them (this grainy vocal like sound)
was waiting for the big drums to drop in, and they kinda did. Although a more hefty sound would've been great.
as for a work in progress - it's good
with regards
Lucia
the physical moddeled thingy at the beginning is slightly to clean for a "don't kill yerself" song, isn't it.
the vocals are cool and especially the effect underneath them (this grainy vocal like sound)
was waiting for the big drums to drop in, and they kinda did. Although a more hefty sound would've been great.
as for a work in progress - it's good
with regards
Lucia
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 426 posts since 23 Apr, 2004 from the people's republic of popistan
hi lucia,LeftoverLasagne wrote: the physical moddeled thingy at the beginning is slightly to clean for a "don't kill yerself" song, isn't it.
i was referring to the last chorus, but anyway which sound would you choose instead of that modelled harp?
cheerz
dexx
My Distortion is Analogue...
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- KVRAF
- 2081 posts since 8 Apr, 2004
It doesn't crash enough when the drums kick in... It needs more dynamics.. maybe some distorted electric guitars or something else come in when the drums do. I'm not sure about that harp either... though I can't think what to replace it with, I'd probably just play around with me Microwave till I found a sound I liked!
It might just be the mix though.. ... the songs good.
Ben
It might just be the mix though.. ... the songs good.
Ben
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 426 posts since 23 Apr, 2004 from the people's republic of popistan
ben if you think that you found something on the microwave i could send over the midi-file of that part....
the mix may sound a bit thin, because we still havent played any bass on the thing
the mix may sound a bit thin, because we still havent played any bass on the thing
My Distortion is Analogue...
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 426 posts since 23 Apr, 2004 from the people's republic of popistan
worked a bit on it:
new version: http://www.theyareclean.com/trouble_is_d.mp3
old version: http://www.theyareclean.com/trouble_is.mp3
new version: http://www.theyareclean.com/trouble_is_d.mp3
old version: http://www.theyareclean.com/trouble_is.mp3
My Distortion is Analogue...
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- KVRAF
- 2081 posts since 8 Apr, 2004
Thats sounding a lot better..
nice one deks
nice one deks