A Song About a Cannibal

[KTHE]

Going for a horror movie theme, 'I Will Eat Your Family' is only my second completed song. The original is six minutes long, but I cut it short for a couple of reasons. I'm fairly new at computer music (less than 1 year) so please let me know what you think, what I need to change, etc.

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Lyrics:

I will eat your family

Do you ever wonder what it's like to be alone
I will be all quiet when I break into your home
I will * you up and I will give your dog a bone
Call the cops for help, you have a disconnected phone

Disconnected, disconnected

I will eat your family
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Here you go:
http://www.myspace.com/kthe2