Glooper - Hold on your time [pop]

[Glooper]

Here's a song I've been working on with Jen... feedback wanted as usual...

http://www.phunkynutts.com/music/Gloope ... me%206.mp3

Ben

[Glooper]

bump...

[kara]

Hi Ben

How is the new site doing ?
Great pop song you have there, I couldn't think of one remark beside 'I love it'

[Eric Bourne]

I listened to this one over my lunch break, really enjoyed it. The vocals levels are pretty good, but the vocals fall a bit too far into the mix during the chorus (starting around 1:18 or so). The verses are very clear though. I like the bubbling fx, nice unique touch. The strings sound great.

[donkey tugger]

Nice ideas, production too. Nae chorus though! Not always necessary, but if you're going to do that one progression thing, I'll wager you need to hold back a bit more earlier. Especially with the vocals, leave the double tracking out till later. Ends with a bit of whimper, all the bits are there but th'arrangement seems lacking to moi.

[Glooper]

Hi Ben

How is the new site doing ?
Great pop song you have there, I couldn't think of one remark beside 'I love it'

It's getting there... Got to do a bit of tweaking to the database. Also need some graphics off you at some point for the top corner link... will send an e-mail later..

Cheers for the comment.

Ben

[Glooper]

I listened to this one over my lunch break, really enjoyed it. The vocals levels are pretty good, but the vocals fall a bit too far into the mix during the chorus (starting around 1:18 or so). The verses are very clear though. I like the bubbling fx, nice unique touch. The strings sound great.

Cheers Eric.. glad you enjoyed it..

I think your right about the vocal levels.. in fact It's also slightly too loud in the bit between the second verse and chorus type bit.

Ben

[Glooper]

Nice ideas, production too. Nae chorus though! Not always necessary, but if you're going to do that one progression thing, I'll wager you need to hold back a bit more earlier. Especially with the vocals, leave the double tracking out till later. Ends with a bit of whimper, all the bits are there but th'arrangement seems lacking to moi.

Cheers for the comments. yeah.. it's more of an album track than a single... with the lack of a definitive chorus. I tried to hold back by only bringing in the electric guitars in the last chorusy type bit. Though I'll try playing around the vocals a bit when I sort out the levels of it.

I actually quite like the whimper ending...

Ben

[blaster78]

nice tune ben, seems a bit bass light in places but that may be intentional and the strings while lovely seem to be a little overpowering at times.

nice one.

[Glooper]

nice tune ben, seems a bit bass light in places but that may be intentional and the strings while lovely seem to be a little overpowering at times.

nice one.

Cheers steve..

[Glooper]

bump

[thenumber23]

I have an interesting problem regarding music in styles that I don't normally listen to. I either hate them, which I know after one listen, or I am undecided if I like it or not. In the latter case, I listen to the song again and again until I can make a decision.

Well, I've listened to this song at least 10 times now, so I guess that's a clear sign I like it! Very tasteful orchestration and vocals that just fit right in. Quite nice indeed!

Brian

[Glooper]

Cheers. I'm glad you liked it.

Ben