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Amberience · Post by **Amberience** » Sat Nov 18, 2006 4:52 pm

Hey all.

I would love some comments on this track, some help on the direction. I know its down to me, but really, I dunno.. just some inspiration I guess. Any thoughts that come to you, share 'em

Bombshell

If you want any technical icky poo, ask away.

-Andy (bored at home, lacking inspirado)

clueless · Post by **clueless** » Sun Nov 19, 2006 12:07 am

"I don't know where to take this..." - to the bridge!

I'd add a bit more Voodoo hysteria. A percussion/fuzzbox freakout. I like it though!

"Any thoughts that come to you, share 'em" - ok. I was wondering if the male foetus is capable of an erection, and, if not, is somebody somewhere trying to work out a way of marketing viagra to foetuses so they "can cum much volume shoot big many time like porn star have begging any woman?". Probably!

Topiness · Post by **Topiness** » Sun Nov 19, 2006 12:19 am

It reminds me of Gang of Four. (that's good!)

simon and garfunkel did that 'slient night' song where they had a newsreader on one track and some people singing 'silent night' on another. Maybe you could have another voice or narrative track as a counterpoint...

have the odd chord change towards the end as a surprise...

have an evil reversed hidden message bit.

have the bass and gutar playing the same thing sometimes.

vurt · Post by **vurt** » Sun Nov 19, 2006 12:22 am

you want my ideas, you send me the individual tracks

clueless · Post by **clueless** » Sun Nov 19, 2006 12:25 am

ooo! hark at 'im!

polyslax · Post by **polyslax** » Sun Nov 19, 2006 11:59 am

I like the feel of this, but I don't really know where you should take it. I agree with the Gang of Four assessment. All I can really say is you should lose the sample and get some vocals on it.

Lagrange · Post by **Lagrange** » Sun Nov 19, 2006 12:07 pm

Add a crunched hifreq electric guitar.. Same key as the bass, transposed an octave up or so and harmonically offset 3 semitones or so.. Then build up your drums w cymbals, rides and rolls.. variate between the original feel and the more excited one and this will bring it life!

Original feel = story telling part
Embellished parts = the emotional point behind it all

BTW Dont get sued by Chomski

while your at it!!

nitex · Post by **nitex** » Sun Nov 19, 2006 2:03 pm

My first thought, was to layer some more drumparts, to get a nice trip hop feeling, some more dubby elements might work too. For inspiration Aphilas springs to my mind.

http://www.archive.org/details/mia049

I don't know where to take this... would love some help!!