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Hey, I'm pretty new to this, but I've made something small I'd like to share, it's 54 seconds long, I want to make it longer, only I'm not sure where to take it at the moment!

So, can someone take a listen to this and tell me what you think?

http://pixelcarnage.net/Projects/Gzutt/ ... stLoud.mp3 (860Kb)
Last edited by TheWolven on Sat Nov 25, 2006 9:16 am, edited 1 time in total.

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Link doesn't work
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Thanks... somehow the filename got an extra space in its name. Fixed :)

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Are you shure of the original audiofile because there's no sound coming out of my headphones and speakers from the dowloaded mp3

link works here tough...



NEVER MIND, ...my bad !
Last edited by Krakatau on Sat Nov 25, 2006 9:03 am, edited 1 time in total.

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Link works ok, but you need to crank the volume. It's a bit low ATM
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Ok, if thats all it it, it'll take me a few minutes to upload a new copy.

EDIT: Right, it's now: http://pixelcarnage.net/Projects/Gzutt/ ... stLoud.mp3

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Well... really, this is the part where you have to roll up your sleeves and write the track! You've got some good elements to begin with, now you have to work on composition, variation, sound design, mix etc.

Nobody else can write the song for you, unless you're after a collaboration.
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Well, thanks for the comments, because its now grown into a two minute track, minus one thing to finish it off: a guitar/keyboard solo!

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