Found some lyrics (by crimsonwarlock)in the amazing "lyrics needing songs" thread and tried to make some music around it, and now i'd like to give it back to the collective!
Dont care much about genres, some guitars, bass, vocals (beware: gerrman axxent!
), a little chimera synth. Stylistically anachronistic, i'm afraid! Maybe even 80ish, who knows? 
I'm so absolutely no singer and have only a crappy mic for that purpose, so the vocals might sound a little overprocessed (no pitch correcting tho)!
Fumbled around for ages on the vocals and the drums, but the result is less than ideal..
What i'd like to know now is :
a) Does the arrangement work for you?
b) Suggestions soundwise?
c) Other improvement ideas (mix/instrumentation)?
Need some
and am counting on your ears!Cheers
