Looking for a little feedback (new track, exerimental)...
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 80 posts since 11 Feb, 2003 from Amonst the sheeple...
Hey, long time no see to KvR... I go through phases... Anyways, I've got a song for you to preview. Not sure what style this is... but I'm sure it's enough of a blend of everything, it would appeal to a lot of you. Rock, electronic, industrial, experimental, whatever.... anyways, Just listen to it and give me whatever comments you can think of...
Enjoy and thanks in advance...
-Kyle
Under the stars...
http://www.fallingdownstudio.com/kyle/m ... rstars.mp3
Enjoy and thanks in advance...
-Kyle
Under the stars...
http://www.fallingdownstudio.com/kyle/m ... rstars.mp3
"Life isn't about finding yourself. Life is about creating yourself."
— George Bernard Shaw
— George Bernard Shaw
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- KVRAF
- 2135 posts since 12 Jul, 2004 from Brave New World
are you kidding me?
I loved this. I thought the lead guitar could have hit a few different notes and might benefit from some tonal adjustment. but this is something that I would definitely listen to regularly.
I loved this. I thought the lead guitar could have hit a few different notes and might benefit from some tonal adjustment. but this is something that I would definitely listen to regularly.
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- KVRAF
- 2185 posts since 25 Jan, 2007 from the back room, away from his wife's sight (or so he thinks)
Wooo this is COOL! Need moar!
There were a few segments where I thought the guitar somehow didn't fit with the rest but it was brief and overall its really cool.
That's going in my Music folder
I recognize that voice of yours ... I think I have another song of yours around here somewhere
There were a few segments where I thought the guitar somehow didn't fit with the rest but it was brief and overall its really cool.
That's going in my Music folder
I recognize that voice of yours ... I think I have another song of yours around here somewhere
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Squire Stratocaster / Chapman ML3 Modern V2 / Fender Precision Bass
Formerly known as arke, VladimirDimitrievich, bslf, and ctmg. Yep, those bans were deserved.
Squire Stratocaster / Chapman ML3 Modern V2 / Fender Precision Bass
Formerly known as arke, VladimirDimitrievich, bslf, and ctmg. Yep, those bans were deserved.
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- KVRian
- 634 posts since 4 Apr, 2003 from Reykjavik, Iceland
Veeeery nice
Awesome song with good beats and the singing is top notch.
Only negative i have to say is some of the distortion guitar parts. They sound too "amateurish" for a otherwise very well produced song. They lack punch and sound too thin. The part around 0:55 sounds amazing though.
If you work a bit on the guitar parts this song will be a killer.
Awesome song with good beats and the singing is top notch.
Only negative i have to say is some of the distortion guitar parts. They sound too "amateurish" for a otherwise very well produced song. They lack punch and sound too thin. The part around 0:55 sounds amazing though.
If you work a bit on the guitar parts this song will be a killer.
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- KVRAF
- 2086 posts since 11 Feb, 2003
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- Hun #3
- 4260 posts since 25 Mar, 2002 from A quaint little village just south of Hamburg, Germany
hmm nice!!
I want to hear this on a big sound system...
wow! Now it's turning into Indie Rock all of a sudden
Very cool tune!
Marco
I want to hear this on a big sound system...
wow! Now it's turning into Indie Rock all of a sudden
Very cool tune!
Marco
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 80 posts since 11 Feb, 2003 from Amonst the sheeple...
intel
Yeah, the intro does need something more on the guitar and some there on, definately agree... but, Thanks man, glad you like what I'm doing here
Chris Walton
Hah, yeah... you probably have an old track or two of mine, I hang out here from time to time throughout the year.. glad you like the tune, regardless of a few notes..
Hellbilly
Yeah... I was kinda shooting for a thiner texture where you're not liking those guitars... but I agree, they need something more there... I just haven't hit it yet... glad you like the tune though man
mr.me
Always glad to from you Mr. Me Glad you like it... and maybe you will hear a little more from me...
Bonteburg
Thanks man Yeah, I mixed it mainly on my K240s but it translates nicely to any stereo glad you like it.
Yeah, the intro does need something more on the guitar and some there on, definately agree... but, Thanks man, glad you like what I'm doing here
Chris Walton
Hah, yeah... you probably have an old track or two of mine, I hang out here from time to time throughout the year.. glad you like the tune, regardless of a few notes..
Hellbilly
Yeah... I was kinda shooting for a thiner texture where you're not liking those guitars... but I agree, they need something more there... I just haven't hit it yet... glad you like the tune though man
mr.me
Always glad to from you Mr. Me Glad you like it... and maybe you will hear a little more from me...
Bonteburg
Thanks man Yeah, I mixed it mainly on my K240s but it translates nicely to any stereo glad you like it.
"Life isn't about finding yourself. Life is about creating yourself."
— George Bernard Shaw
— George Bernard Shaw