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MancDan · Post by **MancDan** » Tue Jul 24, 2007 11:51 pm

Hey. Just put this together. It's my first real effort so it's a little simple, but I'd really appreciate any input negative/positive. All for the greater good

EDIT:
http://www.jukeboxalive.com/audio_play_ ... kin=328589

Thanks!
Dan.

vurt · Post by **vurt** » Wed Jul 25, 2007 12:02 am

tagged for morning

always happy to help out a fellow manc

can i ask where in manc, im here in moston

MancDan · Post by **MancDan** » Wed Jul 25, 2007 12:08 am

vurt wrote:tagged for morning

always happy to help out a fellow manc

can i ask where in manc, im here in moston

Yeah? I know a few lads in Moston. Used to live in Newton heath

Small world eh? I'm living in Wythenshawe at the moment though, I live in Salford when at Uni.

Thanks. or should I say. SAAAFFE

Jazzyspoon · Post by **Jazzyspoon** » Wed Jul 25, 2007 2:59 am

Space....your initial frontier. Welcome aboard from abroad.
Negative comments? not really. You've got a good start here for a dance track. The only thing constructive I can give you is that the drums are a little typical and could use some fills or at least a crash, both backwards and forwards now and then. The lead keyline is cool wide and kinda pretty.
The little arp synth is decent too, but could use a little something to help it from being so dry. (that is an opinion, BTW)
Let me know as you update this and I look forward to your future posts.
peace
jazzyspoon

MancDan · Post by **MancDan** » Wed Jul 25, 2007 9:56 am

Thanks! I've already learnt alot from being here just a week. Nice site!

I appreciate the reply.

When you say dry, what would you suggest it needs? any Ideas? Do my drums have umph? Finally, is the sidechain on the lead effective or could it do with a little more?

I'll get on it straight away.
Thanks once again!
dan

adam_1277 · Post by **adam_1277** » Wed Jul 25, 2007 12:19 pm

alright Dan,

all i want to say is - keep at it!

this track reminds me of stuff i used to do,

just keep experimenting.....

MancDan · Post by **MancDan** » Wed Jul 25, 2007 4:30 pm

just uploaded an edit. Added a few things.

Have'a listen. Ta.

MancDan · Post by **MancDan** » Wed Jul 25, 2007 8:12 pm

B..b..b...bump!

vurt · Post by **vurt** » Thu Jul 26, 2007 12:56 am

im on the laptop at the moment so cant give too much of a comment on mix n stuff...
so far though i would say its a good piece, as jazzyspoon said some of the synth lines are nice indeed.
ill have to have a proper listen when i get back to the main pc

MancDan · Post by **MancDan** » Thu Jul 26, 2007 2:56 am

vurt wrote:im on the laptop at the moment so cant give too much of a comment on mix n stuff...
so far though i would say its a good piece, as jazzyspoon said some of the synth lines are nice indeed.
ill have to have a proper listen when i get back to the main pc

Thanks. It worked out alright! I'm quite please with it. Everyone who's listened, mates whatever seem to like it an all. All good!

rbet · Post by **rbet** » Thu Jul 26, 2007 3:09 am

Thith tlack ith theksthy! I liek evelything abouth ith!

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MancDan · Post by **MancDan** » Thu Jul 26, 2007 5:26 am

Thanks. Ahh the fruits of labour are sweet satisfaction

MancDan · Post by **MancDan** » Thu Jul 26, 2007 7:17 pm

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inf0tr8r · Post by **inf0tr8r** » Thu Jul 26, 2007 9:01 pm

pretty cool...one + would be a thicker kick and some more percussion fills... good start

PhaseShift · Post by **PhaseShift** » Thu Jul 26, 2007 11:44 pm

Since this track is a lot like what I create, I thought I'd drop by
to say that I enjoyed it and to keep up the good work

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