Would love some critique on my song, The world has let its children down
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemus ... dID=405294
The world has let its children down
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NotTheCommonDose NotTheCommonDose https://www.kvraudio.com/forum/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=107520
- KVRian
- 792 posts since 16 May, 2006 from Oswego/Babylon NY
wow, I love the opening so far. Once the singing comes in it reminds me of something you'd hear on an 80's DJ collection mix. This song has a strange corniness to it that I just can't relate to. I think it's that string sound. I love the vocal harmony. I do believe the production could be amplified, as in mixed to have a 'bigger,' louder feel to it.
That's a pretty cool guitar solo, kind of basic but hits the spot. I can't relate to the lyrics though, it just doesn't mean anything to me, it might be the tones and the apathetic sort of feeling that. I like the piano work at the end.
Anywho, keep going at it!
That's a pretty cool guitar solo, kind of basic but hits the spot. I can't relate to the lyrics though, it just doesn't mean anything to me, it might be the tones and the apathetic sort of feeling that. I like the piano work at the end.
Anywho, keep going at it!
