Bike, just a pop instrumental

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hi,

as the title says, here's some pop instrumental i had fun playin' yesterday.

Bike

Any impression or comment mucho mucho appreciated.

ciao
Luca
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wow, sounds great. well done. Puts some vocals in and you're golden :)

attempt at critical feedback:
the beeping, sounded a bit off to me when the verse changes key and then again in the mid 8 key change(?). The kick gets a little lost in the mix, but that may be by design. The bridge/break is perfect for me. None of this really matters in the end, though.

Was there a vocalist in mind? I hope this gets some more hits here today!

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Thanks a lot ourobros for the comment and good points :)

It would be great to have some vocals on it, even if i'm not actually in touch with any singer yet.

Ciao
Luca
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This really nice. Do you have a singer yet? Do you have vocal melody and/or lyrics in mind? I'd like to try singing with it.

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Yeah. Just what I needed now =)
Really good Nice track in the sense of makes you feel Happy.
At some points the song is a bit "Leadless" but as said before, if you could add some vocals, it would be perfect. :-)
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nice little ditty :)

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wow what a wonderful song! Great - please put vocals!

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