Bike, just a pop instrumental
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- KVRian
- Topic Starter
- 898 posts since 31 Dec, 2004
hi,
as the title says, here's some pop instrumental i had fun playin' yesterday.
Bike
Any impression or comment mucho mucho appreciated.
ciao
Luca
as the title says, here's some pop instrumental i had fun playin' yesterday.
Bike
Any impression or comment mucho mucho appreciated.
ciao
Luca
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- KVRAF
- 7880 posts since 16 Apr, 2003 from -on the outside looking in
wow, sounds great. well done. Puts some vocals in and you're golden
attempt at critical feedback:
the beeping, sounded a bit off to me when the verse changes key and then again in the mid 8 key change(?). The kick gets a little lost in the mix, but that may be by design. The bridge/break is perfect for me. None of this really matters in the end, though.
Was there a vocalist in mind? I hope this gets some more hits here today!
attempt at critical feedback:
the beeping, sounded a bit off to me when the verse changes key and then again in the mid 8 key change(?). The kick gets a little lost in the mix, but that may be by design. The bridge/break is perfect for me. None of this really matters in the end, though.
Was there a vocalist in mind? I hope this gets some more hits here today!
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- KVRian
- Topic Starter
- 898 posts since 31 Dec, 2004
Thanks a lot ourobros for the comment and good points
It would be great to have some vocals on it, even if i'm not actually in touch with any singer yet.
Ciao
Luca
It would be great to have some vocals on it, even if i'm not actually in touch with any singer yet.
Ciao
Luca
Dream Audio Tools - Sample libraries http://www.dreamaudiotools.com
Archisounds - Music Website http://www.archisounds.net
Archisounds - Music Website http://www.archisounds.net
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- KVRAF
- 2990 posts since 22 Dec, 2004
This really nice. Do you have a singer yet? Do you have vocal melody and/or lyrics in mind? I'd like to try singing with it.
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- KVRist
- 270 posts since 15 Jun, 2004 from Munic
Yeah. Just what I needed now =)
Really good Nice track in the sense of makes you feel Happy.
At some points the song is a bit "Leadless" but as said before, if you could add some vocals, it would be perfect.
Really good Nice track in the sense of makes you feel Happy.
At some points the song is a bit "Leadless" but as said before, if you could add some vocals, it would be perfect.
- AcousticHippie
- 4521 posts since 12 Mar, 2003
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- KVRian
- 1023 posts since 14 Jan, 2004 from germany
wow what a wonderful song! Great - please put vocals!