KVR Audio

PERV · Post by **PERV** » Fri Sep 28, 2007 3:01 am

Please have a listen to these tracks (Worm & Circus) and tell me what you think. Constructive criticism is welcome.

I have hosted them on my VIRB page which is here http://www.virb.com/PERV

Thanks

johnny2johnny · Post by **johnny2johnny** » Fri Sep 28, 2007 3:09 am

wowzers first post... i tag this fer later

johnny2johnny · Post by **johnny2johnny** » Fri Sep 28, 2007 3:45 am

http://www.virb.com/PERV nice work mate, has potential for sure...

PERV · Post by **PERV** » Fri Sep 28, 2007 3:55 am

thanks appreciate it

johnny2johnny · Post by **johnny2johnny** » Fri Sep 28, 2007 3:59 am

no problem, I would like to add a little more, but I am quite tired...

johnny2johnny · Post by **johnny2johnny** » Fri Sep 28, 2007 3:59 am

what r u doing awake at 5 am anyways
?

PERV · Post by **PERV** » Fri Sep 28, 2007 4:03 am

being unemployed

johnny2johnny · Post by **johnny2johnny** » Fri Sep 28, 2007 4:07 am

i would have said " i'm wired on coke, and I just finished banging my girlfriend, what do you want my life story? "

justin3am · Post by **justin3am** » Fri Sep 28, 2007 4:07 am

You've got some cool sounds here. On Circus I like the BBD reverb on the snare. I also like the spacey break down on Worm. I agree with johnny you've got some potential.

3am

PERV · Post by **PERV** » Fri Sep 28, 2007 4:14 am

is it too late to edit?

PERV · Post by **PERV** » Fri Sep 28, 2007 4:17 am

justin3am wrote:You've got some cool sounds here. On Circus I like the BBD reverb on the snare. I also like the spacey break down on Worm. I agree with johnny you've got some potential.

3am

this is the first time i have made my records available to anyone apart from mates so its nice to hear good feedback, its much appreciated

johnny2johnny · Post by **johnny2johnny** » Fri Sep 28, 2007 4:23 am

PERV wrote:is it too late to edit?

edit to what? " sometimes on a strange saturday night I have been known to drop e and sleep with a hot boy as well? "
mate, I really don't think the music cafe is a place to express your sexuality like this...
the only places I have really bothered to hear electro are " the ghetto " and um, AK...
on tottenham ct rd... ( mad spelling error ) other than that I really try not to bother with it.
however i like your tracks, but the mixing on the drums, at least needs major work. to me sounds are just jumping out everywhere...
did you send all your drums to a single buss, and compress them together?

( edit ) cause my eyesight sucks, and that had to many double spaces

johnny2johnny · Post by **johnny2johnny** » Fri Sep 28, 2007 4:26 am

now checking out your second track... first I did worm, now doing circus..... circus is good, but mate, mix mix... what monitors are you using?

and you have high frequencies in your music that need to be brought under control, electro is darker than this

Jazzyspoon · Post by **Jazzyspoon** » Fri Sep 28, 2007 4:28 am

Hi Perv,
Welcome!
As for Worm and Circus, you have some solid tracks here that seem recorded and arranged nicely for the genre. Not exactly a boundary challenging or unique sound, but very deep chill. Some good sound choices. I like the break in Worm at the 1:45 mark. I dig Milk too, actually. Good late night DJ stuff.
Looking forward to hearing more in the future.
Peace and welcome aboard,
Jazzyspoon

PERV · Post by **PERV** » Fri Sep 28, 2007 4:31 am

i have done on recent tracks but not these, because they are a bit older i'm sick of hearing them.
i think i have got better since because i have changed my approach after a lot of trial and error, but i still have a lot learn.
i'm gonna force myself to strip them back and start again really and spend some time on them.

on the track called milk i have ran all the drums through one compressor, eq'ing the kick, hats, snares & percs seperatly. but i cant get that spark, it sounds slightly cleaner but dull.

PERV - Worm & Circus