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Hi,

I created a song (currently instrumental) and would be glad if you could tell me your thoughts about (MixUp, Arrangement etc.).

As well, anytime there should come up also a version with vocals soon.

--- edit: sorry the first link was the wrong version... ---

http://storage.v-band.de/natalie/natali ... length.mp3

Thanks in advance!

alex
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Hi Alex.

I liked the idea but it doesn't really sound like a song to me, just a verse-like part that repeats. I think you'd need at least two other rhythm parts and a melody to make it feel substantial.
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Hi Shane,

thanks for putting your ears on that!

Yes, I agree, it's very rhytm based with one straight "melody" through the whole thing. I'll see how it sounds like when the vocal part is done - maybe some alternate breaks will help.

Thanks!

alex
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hey mate. used to play guitar in rock bands. just curious, do you know the 12 bar blues? 1/4/5 this is of major importance to learn if you like to make rock music!!!!!! without a basic understanding of 1 4 5 and the circle of 5ths, you really have a lot trouble with the style of ac dc, and def lepoard, and etc... however 1, 4, 5 and the circle of 5ths is super simple. plz google, David Harp " music theory made easy " and also Rikky Rooksby " how to write songs on guitar "

plz note. I am not being mean, or rude. I guess you know what it is your doing, I havnt heard any of your other music, but I am suggesting you expand your mind and knowledge. you asked for feedback, and this is mine.

cheers
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Thanks a lot for listening :-)

And yes, I know a bit of music theory - for circle of 5ths I mostly use this interactive circle :-)

But as well, breaking the rules makes me happy in addition with expanding my mind :-)

Thanks!

alex
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crazyALEX wrote: for circle of 5ths I mostly use this interactive circle :-)

this confuses me... and I know a little music theory too.

I guess your track is a work in progress. maybe its minimal rock!!!!! that would be cool. I liked it, I mean the rythm was steady. but you know, i don't know you, so I don't know maybe I could have been the biggest help in your day, and maybe not... one never knows what somebody else may or may not know.


anyways! what is important is I was not trying to offend you. cheers then
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Uh, no, I felt not offended anytime :-)

And as well - lol - I've seen I posted the wrong thing lol

Here's the right version (Full length):

http://storage.v-band.de/natalie/natali ... length.mp3

Thanks!

alex
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I would regard this as 'promising'. As said before it needs more variation.
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