Dance tune
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 102 posts since 19 Jan, 2008 from Estonia
hi. it would be great to get some feedback...as to the mix and tune itself. its a dance/club sound....my second tune in Cubase 4 so...never mind, be straight
http://martellorotativo.com/dance.mp3
thanks
http://martellorotativo.com/dance.mp3
thanks
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- Banned
- 4072 posts since 7 Nov, 2007
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- Banned
- 4072 posts since 7 Nov, 2007
Hi mate, this is a cool tune with some major mix issues. I am not sure if that really long monotone guitar like sound needs to be in this track at all. This song is a lot better after the half way point, The vocals here sound cool.
you have some wicked sounds and stuff in here, but you need some rethinking, for sure
cheers
you have some wicked sounds and stuff in here, but you need some rethinking, for sure
cheers
- Narcissistic Messiah
- 4562 posts since 8 Apr, 2002 from https://soundcloud.com/remcoh
nice sphere!
sweet radio comp - sound
perhaps the ongoing synth-string at the start a bit softer
thanks for this!
sweet radio comp - sound
perhaps the ongoing synth-string at the start a bit softer
thanks for this!
- KVRist
- 107 posts since 11 Dec, 2007
Hi Alvin,
it's really a cool track. Really like it and it also sounds quite good on my headphones.
Maybe you can lay a bit more reverb on the distorted sound which is ongoing through the whole track. This could make it less aggressive when its a bit more in the background. Or maybe just quite it down a bit.
Overall a very nice track!
Cheers,
Neptune
it's really a cool track. Really like it and it also sounds quite good on my headphones.
Maybe you can lay a bit more reverb on the distorted sound which is ongoing through the whole track. This could make it less aggressive when its a bit more in the background. Or maybe just quite it down a bit.
Overall a very nice track!
Cheers,
Neptune
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- KVRer
- 7 posts since 30 Jan, 2008 from Germany
Nice song !!! nice melody !!!! and interesting style some dance sounds with some house elements:)
but i think the guitar-sounds are a little bit to loud
but i think the guitar-sounds are a little bit to loud
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- KVRist
- 401 posts since 15 Oct, 2007 from Terrebonne, Montreal, Canada