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I need some help on where to go next with this song I've made in the past few hours. I want to add in some guitar and vox. Should I add more synths? Where can they be placed and with what effects? How should I deal with EQs as far as the bass and drums? Any advice would be loved!

Thanks!!!

http://www.sendspace.com/file/3eo3gi

PS-I realize that this song is a bit different from the minimal/glitchy ambient songs that are normally posted here, so this may serve as a breath of fresh air, perhaps? :)
Last edited by ppadru1 on Sun Feb 10, 2008 2:37 pm, edited 1 time in total.

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ppadru1 wrote: PS-I realize that this song is a bit different from the minimal/glitchy ambient songs that are normally posted here, so this may serve as a breath of fresh air, perhaps? :)
Oh thanks, I'll tell Daniel Pompougnac that he makes minimal/glitchy ambient songs. :)
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Nice track man...but I think that the MP3 file is incomplete ! It end abruptly!

Good work!

Mrstew

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its not incomplete, its just not finished! Any advice would be appreciated!

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Hey, you hit a nerve with that sound with me! Please work a bit more on it. You need to start some catchy melody on top of it after going through the chord progression the 2nd time or so. Otherwise it's too monotonous.

But I really like the beat and the chord progression! Can you post the chords here?

Oh, and if you want to, I can help you out with a nice melody.

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jakob wrote:Hey, you hit a nerve with that sound with me! Please work a bit more on it. You need to start some catchy melody on top of it after going through the chord progression the 2nd time or so. Otherwise it's too monotonous.

But I really like the beat and the chord progression! Can you post the chords here?

Oh, and if you want to, I can help you out with a nice melody.
Nice chord progression but sounds a bit like a backing track to my ears. A singer or a melody might be what you need.

Off Topic : Btw Jakob, glad to c you back.

Did you ever had some news about that Ejazz collab project ?

Cheers,

LtZ
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Its been updated with some effects and more song structure. Its not done, but I would still like some guidance as to where to go next. How are the EQ's sounding?

I am planning on adding some vocals and guitar tracks to the song. As far as help with a melody, no thanks man, I think I got it for now :)

http://www.sendspace.com/file/3eo3gi

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