Give Me Your Opinion Please

[lilcrise]

I just recently started making beats and i was wonder how they sound and if u like them let me know thank you!

http://www.soundclick.com/l2

[VitaminD]

To me, it sounds like you're trying to sell melodies instead.. with simplistic percussion behind it. Theres no transitions or fills in your 'beat' so it seems very mechanical to me..

you have

thud-thud chh thack chh thud-thud chh thack chh thud-thud chh thack chh thud-thud chh thack chh thud-thud chh thack chh etc.

instead of

thud-thud chh thack chh thud-th-thud thack chh chh thud.. etc