Hi All,
First time in posting anything in this part of the forums. Just finished a tune, the first one in over 12 months due to hectic lifestyle etc.
Anyway take a listen:-
http://www.btinternet.com/~themusicscap ... ject_X.mp3
And go easy on the comments.......only joking, anything constructive is welcome.
Project X
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Adrian Earnshaw Music Adrian Earnshaw Music https://www.kvraudio.com/forum/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=9148 - KVRian
- Topic Starter
- 766 posts since 23 Sep, 2003 from UK
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- KVRist
- 207 posts since 4 Mar, 2007
OK i had a listen 
The overall feel of the tune is great! Maybe you could really have the tune take off somewhere though. The melodies work well, but seem toget a bit of a sameish cadance, even though the notes change.. so maybe it'd be cool to have some sort of solo (with a different lead sound) somewhere..
I also like the piano melody.. maybe you can spice that up a little too with a less quantized feel.. maybe a few extra notes here and there, so it starts to feel like a phrase instead of a bunch of sequenced notes.
Well that's basically al i can think of.. lol. Great tune, and interesting sounds! well mixed too (maybe some of the later drums need some compression/eq-ing or something though).
Keep up the great work!
The overall feel of the tune is great! Maybe you could really have the tune take off somewhere though. The melodies work well, but seem toget a bit of a sameish cadance, even though the notes change.. so maybe it'd be cool to have some sort of solo (with a different lead sound) somewhere..
I also like the piano melody.. maybe you can spice that up a little too with a less quantized feel.. maybe a few extra notes here and there, so it starts to feel like a phrase instead of a bunch of sequenced notes.
Well that's basically al i can think of.. lol. Great tune, and interesting sounds! well mixed too (maybe some of the later drums need some compression/eq-ing or something though).
Keep up the great work!
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Adrian Earnshaw Music Adrian Earnshaw Music https://www.kvraudio.com/forum/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=9148
- KVRian
- Topic Starter
- 766 posts since 23 Sep, 2003 from UK
Thankyou for taking the time out to post your comments. I certainly will go back and see about that solo as to be honest it was something I toy'd with but scrapped. At the same time I will see if any different chords and cadences will fit without altering the feel too much.
90% of the sounds came from atmosphere, stuck through a whole bunch of delay's, reverb's and camelspace. The piano was good old wusikstation.
90% of the sounds came from atmosphere, stuck through a whole bunch of delay's, reverb's and camelspace. The piano was good old wusikstation.
I invite you to 'voyage' over to https://adrianearnshaw.com, sign up for some fun e-mail 'blasts', and look forward to helping you launch your ears - and projects - into the stratosphere.
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- KVRAF
- 2327 posts since 13 Apr, 2004 from Vancouver, Canada
This is pretty nice overall.
I agree that the piano sounds too 'sequenced' and oughta be spiced up a bit.
The phasey pad sounds good for the most part. But during the intro piano bit, the gating effect sounds a bit odd. I'm not sure if you actually used a gate, or just sequenced the chords with a soft attack. Either way, I wonder if it'd sound a bit better with less contour there.
I like how the pad sounds from 1:48 to 1:57 where there seems to be some added 7th harmonising going on or something. Really atmospheric (I wish there were more of it )
Anyway, I enjoyed the listen... an all-round nice track.
I agree that the piano sounds too 'sequenced' and oughta be spiced up a bit.
The phasey pad sounds good for the most part. But during the intro piano bit, the gating effect sounds a bit odd. I'm not sure if you actually used a gate, or just sequenced the chords with a soft attack. Either way, I wonder if it'd sound a bit better with less contour there.
I like how the pad sounds from 1:48 to 1:57 where there seems to be some added 7th harmonising going on or something. Really atmospheric (I wish there were more of it
)Anyway, I enjoyed the listen... an all-round nice track.
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- Banned
- 4072 posts since 7 Nov, 2007
Nice track. I wouldn't change a thing.
Captured such a cool moment time.
Cheers
Captured such a cool moment time.
Cheers
