My new track - [Progressive House\Chillout] BenU - Skylight
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- KVRer
- Topic Starter
- 23 posts since 20 Jan, 2013
Hello everyone,
A Track I just finished - or at least I finished.
Just want to hear some comments, and feedbacks about the track.
- What do you think the track is lacking?
- what are the good parts?
- Would the track be better if I focus on the latter part as a chillout track and leave the whole "dance" concept?
https://soundcloud.com/ben-u/benu-skylight
Thanks!
A Track I just finished - or at least I finished.
Just want to hear some comments, and feedbacks about the track.
- What do you think the track is lacking?
- what are the good parts?
- Would the track be better if I focus on the latter part as a chillout track and leave the whole "dance" concept?
https://soundcloud.com/ben-u/benu-skylight
Thanks!
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- KVRer
- Topic Starter
- 23 posts since 20 Jan, 2013
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- KVRer
- 20 posts since 11 Mar, 2012 from https://soundcloud.com/3catsdeep
The track is good, but for me it seems to progress too quickly and perhaps there is a bit much happening in just four 'n a bit minutes. Having said that I do lean towards the minimal side of things and enjoy a slow progression.
The first minute is my favourite part, driving and moody.
i think the track could easily be reworked into a piece of chillout/electronica, whether that would be better or not I don't know.
Anyway, I enjoyed listening!
The first minute is my favourite part, driving and moody.
i think the track could easily be reworked into a piece of chillout/electronica, whether that would be better or not I don't know.
Anyway, I enjoyed listening!
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- KVRer
- Topic Starter
- 23 posts since 20 Jan, 2013
Thanks for the detailed feedback!
i guess i do sometimes i do put to much in 4 minutes...
i guess i do sometimes i do put to much in 4 minutes...
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- KVRist
- 331 posts since 4 Feb, 2012
I quite enjoyed this track, very nice melodies, and very nice mood.
I don't know if a progressive track is supposed to "progress" like that but it goes somewhere and I like that.
Great job!
I don't know if a progressive track is supposed to "progress" like that but it goes somewhere and I like that.
Great job!
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- KVRAF
- 1666 posts since 28 Jun, 2007 from Amazon rain forest
The production is clean and crispy, but the track needs a complete arrangement to reach full potential.
For some reason, I can't imagine it as a dance floor hit, but a more home listening experience, which is equaly valid too!
For some reason, I can't imagine it as a dance floor hit, but a more home listening experience, which is equaly valid too!
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- KVRer
- 20 posts since 11 Mar, 2012 from https://soundcloud.com/3catsdeep
No worries mate, i often can't really think of much to say - say "i like it" if I like it or keep my mouth shut if I dont!benyuliel wrote:Thanks for the detailed feedback!
i guess i do sometimes i do put to much in 4 minutes...
Thanks for checking out my stuff on Soundcloud too!
take it easy...
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- KVRer
- Topic Starter
- 23 posts since 20 Jan, 2013
Thanks for the comment! I really appreciate this!Mariosprt wrote: I quite enjoyed this track, very nice melodies, and very nice mood.
Again, thanks for the comment, it really helps a lotdark_virus wrote: For some reason, I can't imagine it as a dance floor hit, but a more home listening experience, which is equaly valid too!
It wasn't meant to be a dancefloor track, so at least this i got right