KVR Audio

Ripper7620 · Post by **Ripper7620** » Sun Jul 27, 2014 11:21 pm

I love Die Form & this is my first attemp at that style:

https://soundcloud.com/ipper7620/master ... evicerated

Sendy · Post by **Sendy** » Sun Jul 27, 2014 11:59 pm

In all honesty, it sounds a bit confused, for two reasons: Firstly, you need to work on your harmony theory - the riffs are a bit stumbly, and secondly, the arrangement feels aimless, with the kick drum starting and stopping, without ever really building tension or momentum.

There's potential, but it needs a fair bit of work, IMO.

Ripper7620 · Post by **Ripper7620** » Mon Jul 28, 2014 12:10 am

Sendy wrote:In all honesty, it sounds a bit confused, for two reasons: Firstly, you need to work on your harmony theory - the riffs are a bit stumbly, and secondly, the arrangement feels aimless, with the kick drum starting and stopping, without ever really building tension or momentum.

There's potential, but it needs a fair bit of work, IMO.

Thanks for the honest critique , although the chaos was intentional.

My attempt at old school Die Form