(Synthpop) Hey Minnesota

[stevenlebeau]

Hey everyone,

I'm trying to make it a point to start showing off some of my music to get feedback. Here's a sort of Kraftwerk-inspired pop song I recorded using Renoise, Tal Vocoder, strings from Tassman, and a few other synths (I can't remember--it's been a while and I've lost the original file in a home burglary in which my computer was stolen)

Here's the link: https://soundcloud.com/strange-invaders/hey-minnesota

[nineofkings]

Catchy! I like the atmosphere, and the bridge when the arpeggios and additional percussion come in is kickass. Certain things could be a little more polished, though. For instance, due to the gaps in the vocal line, some delay would be awesome. Also, a little cut in the mids of the string machine would probably help them sit better. But these are minor details. Good work!

[annode]

I liked that bridge a lot too...well done.
Didn`t care for the melody much, or the snare.