Hi,
we're "cook and stans" and we released 2 new albums on Beatport ans Spotify
Here is a track for free download(there are 4 more for free download).
Do you think its to boring? To monotone?
Maybe you can share your thoughts about the track with me.
Thank you very much for your time,
kind regards,
Stans
I left a few comments and will comment from time to time.
https://soundcloud.com/i-31/1-planet-2
Released new album | track: "planet" | Deephouse | melodic chill ambient
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- KVRer
- Topic Starter
- 23 posts since 5 Nov, 2016 from Freiburg, Germany
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- KVRist
- 392 posts since 10 Apr, 2010
It's nice, but the last two minutes could maybe do with more development. Or you could always make it two minutes shorter.
Listening to more of your tracks on Spotify, it sounds to me like there are some tuning issues in "Lake".
Cadenza por synth is my favourite.
Listening to more of your tracks on Spotify, it sounds to me like there are some tuning issues in "Lake".
Cadenza por synth is my favourite.
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- KVRAF
- 1626 posts since 28 Oct, 2005 from Finland
Agreeable ambient track .. it's not boring ... Maybe a bit monotone ... I think little more lead melody lines here and there would be nice.
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- KVRer
- Topic Starter
- 23 posts since 5 Nov, 2016 from Freiburg, Germany
Hi,
and really thanks for your feedback
Thanks for listening in Spotify!
Wha do you mean with tuning issues. Is there something dissonant?
Kind regards,
Stans
and really thanks for your feedback
Thanks for listening in Spotify!
Wha do you mean with tuning issues. Is there something dissonant?
Kind regards,
Stans
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- KVRist
- 392 posts since 10 Apr, 2010
The piano sound seems out of tune with the rest of the music to me. I mean I realise people sometimes go for that "old out of tune piano" sound deliberately, but it seems excessive to me in parts.
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- KVRer
- Topic Starter
- 23 posts since 5 Nov, 2016 from Freiburg, Germany
Ah okay the piano. Maybe it comes from the delay which carries one note over the other and the melody has halftonesteps in it. Or maybe its a bit overcompressed.
Thanks for your feedback
Stans
Thanks for your feedback
Stans
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- KVRer
- 2 posts since 1 Nov, 2016
Hi mate, love it, listening to it now.
Not boring, but could you make the sounds develope over time, even a bit of filtering or maybe layer up with another voice from a couple of minutes in. Not every song has to have peaks and crescendos, but I always think they should get busier.
Not boring, but could you make the sounds develope over time, even a bit of filtering or maybe layer up with another voice from a couple of minutes in. Not every song has to have peaks and crescendos, but I always think they should get busier.
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- KVRer
- Topic Starter
- 23 posts since 5 Nov, 2016 from Freiburg, Germany
Hi ,
thanks for your input!
Yes your right its very even on the developing scale.
Thats why I made it the first track of the album.
But maybe thats why people dont like it most of the album.
I think its really ambient background.
Thanks again and have a nice day
Stans
,thanks for your input!
Yes your right its very even on the developing scale.
Thats why I made it the first track of the album.
But maybe thats why people dont like it most of the album.
I think its really ambient background.
Thanks again and have a nice day
Stans
