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Jesse Gorter · Post by **Jesse Gorter** » Sat Apr 08, 2017 12:07 pm

Hi guys,

had to create a new waltz, 3/4 time piano work.
what do you think?

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kr39FMpJYu4

layzer · Post by **layzer** » Sat Apr 08, 2017 11:49 pm

very floaty and peaceful....well, till the piano came thundering in and rattled me.
haha... ok it wasnt that bad but i would have introduced it a bit more subtly.
other than that, nice job

Phil999 · Post by **Phil999** » Sun Apr 09, 2017 1:15 am

yes, the piano is not good, including tempo. Good try.

Jesse Gorter · Post by **Jesse Gorter** » Sun Apr 09, 2017 7:18 pm

layzer wrote:very floaty and peaceful....well, till the piano came thundering in and rattled me.
haha... ok it wasnt that bad but i would have introduced it a bit more subtly.
other than that, nice job

do you mean when the piano comes in ? Or later on?
thanks for listening!

Allomerus · Post by **Allomerus** » Tue Apr 11, 2017 6:08 am

Hi Jesse. The music sounds great but the piano would be better if introduced more gradually.
Nice work.

Jesse Gorter · Post by **Jesse Gorter** » Thu Apr 13, 2017 3:13 pm

Allomerus wrote:Hi Jesse. The music sounds great but the piano would be better if introduced more gradually.
Nice work.

I can hear it!
thanks man

seismic1 · Post by **seismic1** » Fri Apr 14, 2017 8:36 pm

I liked the instrumentation and the interesting melody worked very well indeed. The music is a good fit for the title you have chosen.

I thought that the section when the piano first appeared from 0:58-1:20 could have used a little more subtlety (not the arpeggiated line, but the lead). After that it seemed to gel quite well with the rest of the instruments.

Good work

The Moonlit Forest