Save me Ghost, I murder. Mix feedback

[elhewman]

Hey fellows,
I would love some critical ears! How could the song be mixed better? Bass too obvious? How can I make the song come alive?
Not enough or too many elements? Any unwanted glitches? I am going for some grit and dark low-fi, but also wide and expressively alive..... if that makes sense. I want to make an album with a similar sound palette so any feedback on this song will help with my others and strengthen my direction. Much thanks in advance!


https://soundcloud.com/islight3/save-me ... ove-murder