KVR Audio

sun · Post by **sun** » Wed Jul 07, 2004 3:20 pm

hi guys, this is my first post here (well almost), i thought i'd check up with the people from kvr what they think of this little work in progress of mine

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pyramid of phobos

i call it oriental new age, or slow trance, not sure, but you tell me

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heavy usage of z3ta+ in that one, you roxx Rene !.

humbly yours

austere · Post by **austere** » Wed Jul 07, 2004 3:47 pm

definitly has some pyramid feel to it. it's a bit directionless but definitly has a nice atmosphere. the ending is very sudden though... but i'm assuming that's because it's a work in progress mp3.

CypherOne · Post by **CypherOne** » Wed Jul 07, 2004 3:56 pm

nice track, I prefer the first half before that cheesey cairo sound comes in, but of course that exlains the title. definitely a good atmosphere and some nice touches.

welcome to KVR.

kara · Post by **kara** » Wed Jul 07, 2004 4:07 pm

Sure has some Egyptian sun in it

I love the intro !

The first 2 minutes are very good. It seems to me that after the bride from 2:00 to 2:15 you weren't sure anymore where this has to go

With a litle extra work, this will be a great song.

ROny

CypherOne · Post by **CypherOne** » Wed Jul 07, 2004 4:07 pm

bridge Rony, not bride

kara · Post by **kara** » Wed Jul 07, 2004 4:15 pm

CypherOne wrote:bridge Rony, not bride

Oh shit

I wonder, should I learn to mix or better learn English

CypherOne · Post by **CypherOne** » Wed Jul 07, 2004 4:20 pm

bucodi wrote:
CypherOne wrote:bridge Rony, not bride
Oh shit

I wonder, should I learn to mix or better learn English

I think your English is excellent, I thought it was a typing error

sun · Post by **sun** » Wed Jul 07, 2004 5:25 pm

thx all for the comments, that's very nice

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kara · Post by **kara** » Wed Jul 07, 2004 6:09 pm

CypherOne wrote:
bucodi wrote:
CypherOne wrote:bridge Rony, not bride
Oh shit

I wonder, should I learn to mix or better learn English
I think your English is excellent, I thought it was a typing error

tepo, no topo shit let's try again type, no typo
ah finally

rony

mystahr · Post by **mystahr** » Thu Jul 08, 2004 4:30 am

Liking what I am hearing allready, though I do agree with Cypher on that cheesy cairo sound coming in just after 1.10. Breathe some more life into that sound as its quite dull and errrrr. cheesy....

Welcome to Kvr btw.

sun · Post by **sun** » Thu Jul 08, 2004 12:55 pm

hehe indeed after checking it again & again & again, i found the sound "cheesey" too, i replaced it with something more "funny"

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it's the same url should you be curious

thx for the welcome, i already feel at home here

work in progress : pyramid of phobos