Trapped in the Core
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Adrian Earnshaw Music Adrian Earnshaw Music https://www.kvraudio.com/forum/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=9148
- KVRian
- Topic Starter
- 766 posts since 23 Sep, 2003 from UK
My latest composition for your listening pleasure: https://soundcloud.com/biodiode/trapped-in-the-core
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- KVRAF
- 21191 posts since 8 Oct, 2014
Mixed feelings on this one. Mix is fine. Sounds are fine. Arrangement seemed a little loose and without direction in places. Harmonic structure a bit fuzzy at times. Ending was kind of huh? Also, I think melody could have been better defined. Seems the piece was too riff based.
All in all, not bad. Just those few minor nit picks, which is all just personal taste anyway so take it with a minute grain of salt.
All in all, not bad. Just those few minor nit picks, which is all just personal taste anyway so take it with a minute grain of salt.
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Adrian Earnshaw Music Adrian Earnshaw Music https://www.kvraudio.com/forum/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=9148
- KVRian
- Topic Starter
- 766 posts since 23 Sep, 2003 from UK
Thanks for the feedback, you should have heard the original I had put together I trashed a good chunk because I thought it was too repetitive. Frustration may have got the better of me on this track as I had lived with it for too long.
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