Forward (new song)

[WilliamK]

My new song, used Wusik 8008, Poly Ana and Wusik Station V9.

Edit: Decided to work some more on my latest track, Forward. Improved the mastering and added some new stuff.

https://soundcloud.com/william-kalfelz/forward-22

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Here's the previous version...

https://soundcloud.com/william-kalfelz/forward

Cheers, WilliamK

[DJ LFD]

Intro kind of reminds me of a police-call-out... beat, very hip, FX and sounds very nice. Mix sounds a little harsh on the hard-hitting "piish" it distorts.

The strings are alittle off-key but maybe that's the point, sounds kindof industrial, and the winding "wow" synth supports it well.. Liking it.

Bassline at 2:58 is good, maybe mix it with a counter melody-bass, i would love it more... Simplistic at 3:30, and it drives with the bassline so no prob's there

4:00 minutes on sounds like it needs an EQ or LFP to harness the highs, distorting on my setup.

Very Trancey, could use more work as stated above, but i love the vibe, getting chills as i write. at 4:45 the ARP or played ARP, is Arabic IMO, wonder why? but doesn't fit IMHO. after 4:40 the synth that comes in is very mysterious and "painfully obvious and likable."

Hell of a track... hoping to "befriend more KVR users" here...

Wonder if you'll have a gander at an Arabic Track I Produced for the Heroic Victims and Rescue Heroes or the 9/11 Tragedy:
https://soundcloud.com/djlfd/let-it-be-doublecross

[WilliamK]

Oh yeah, txs.

Cheers, WilliamK

[experimental.crow]

'tis the very height of bad manners to post your track in someone else's track thread ...
please remove , and start your own thread ...

thank you ...

[DJ LFD]

Tis' a "Music Cafe"

If the OP feels she/he doesn't want my critique nor a sample of inspiration, please, by all means, let him/ her speak

I will delete the link upon Op's Request... we are all here to "bond" not for "James Bond," nor "bondage" TY.

I Really dig the tune as i am into arabic mussic, and atmospherics, so my critique holds water, it is very solid track, however thing could be fixed for Professional Status.

[jethrobull]

'tis the very height of bad manners to post your track in someone else's track thread ...
please remove , and start your own thread ...

thank you ...

Is quite but a great track nevertheless

[DJ LFD]

Oh yeah, txs.

Cheers, WilliamK

You're very welcome, i love the track wish my ringtone would fit it,

Just a little distortion needs to be fixed .

'tis the very height of bad manners to post your track in someone else's track thread ...
please remove , and start your own thread ...

thank you ...

TY Mr... Hitler is it? Ok then, Let the OP decide and maybe we can change History then, shall we?

Let's not turn a "Music Cafe" into a "Music Concentration Camp" then eh?

[ChamMusic]

Thoroughly enjoyed listening to it...great exotic, thriller scene vibe!

For me, I just wanted it to go even further...

A contrasting section with a new 'key centre' and some generally different ideas for 60 seconds or so before returning to the main ideas for a big finish?

I think it works as it stands as a tense, driving underscore, but needs more development as a stand alone piece of music maybe?

[WilliamK]

Thanks for the feedback. Took some time to work some more on it and decided to do a 2.0 version.

Edit: oops, the previous file was no good, I'm uploading it again...

Cheers, WilliamK

[WilliamK]

Here we go, Forward 2.2

https://soundcloud.com/william-kalfelz/forward-22

Cheers, WilliamK

[JazzyClarinetMan]

This is a great bit of film music - atmospheric.

[JazzyClarinetMan]

This is a great bit of film music - atmospheric.

So great I decided to say it twice.

[WilliamK]

Anyone checked the new 2.2 version?

Cheers, WilliamK

[layzer]

Anyone checked the new 2.2 version?

Cheers, WilliamK

good composition, good sounds, good mix. but.............narrow soundstage.

[layzer]

Improved the mastering and added some new stuff.

so improved means louder with less dynamics, huh? i think i like the old version better.