KVR Audio

freecham · Post by **freecham** » Thu Sep 06, 2018 1:48 pm

a little "electro-downtempo-i-dont-know" piece of music with some chinese taste :

https://soundcloud.com/user-587768598/chinasphere

wagtunes · Post by **wagtunes** » Thu Sep 06, 2018 2:09 pm

My Feedback

Music - 8.5
Instruments - 9
Performance - 8.5
Mix - 9

Overall - 8.75

Comments: Nice pleasant little piece. Decent sound and development. I liked it. Could picture it on some kind of documentary soundtrack or something like that. As a standalone piece would probably need a little more musical variation but not much.

ChamMusic · Post by **ChamMusic** » Thu Sep 06, 2018 9:26 pm

Some great musical ideas in there...

Particularly loved the big rise around the 3 minute mark.

Mix was a bit busy for me for too much of the time...needed stripping back in more sections of the song maybe?

I agree with Wags that it possibly needed a little more variation and contrast to succeed completely on its own.

layzer · Post by **layzer** » Thu Sep 06, 2018 9:43 pm

pretty cool. i liked the sounds and melodies.
it was a tad squashed however, lacking umph. to my ears.

sleepcircle · Post by **sleepcircle** » Thu Sep 06, 2018 11:40 pm

Sounds nice--also good job on the name, it made me want to listen to the song. I know you're not supposed to judge a book by its cover but lot of the song names on this forum put me off, for some reason.

Missing a little sparkle and openness. Nice hook, though, and nice chords.

freecham · Post by **freecham** » Fri Sep 07, 2018 12:23 pm

Thanks for the feedback, mixing is the most difficult thing for me in the process of musical creation...

Chinasphere