PI CRIMSON - DISCONNECT (Future Bass, Melodic House) Feedback?

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It sounds pretty good to me. It sort of stays close to that same motif all the way through but does vary some. Maybe a little more development to maintain interest but perhaps it’s actually fine for that genre.

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fastlanephil wrote:It sort of stays close to that same motif all the way through but does vary some. Maybe a little more development to maintain interest
nah, you are right, Phil. sounds are generic, its repetitive and boring.
the annoying filtering used throughout sounds like an old ruined cassette left out on a dashboard in the hot sun.
i quit half way in... :shrug:

BUT...... mix is good :tu:
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I liked it. :) I didn't hit it and quit it!
my music: http://www.alexcooperusa.com
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layzer wrote:
fastlanephil wrote:It sort of stays close to that same motif all the way through but does vary some. Maybe a little more development to maintain interest
nah, you are right, Phil. sounds are generic, its repetitive and boring.
the annoying filtering used throughout sounds like an old ruined cassette left out on a dashboard in the hot sun.
i quit half way in... :shrug:

BUT...... mix is good :tu:
Thanks for your feedback. You're right, I have to make it sound more interesting and I'll consider that for my new songs!

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My Feedback

Music - 7.5
Instruments - 8.5
Performance - 8.5
Mix - 9.5

Overall - 8.5

Comments: Foundation is fine but needs more variance. Mix is good.

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Some great ideas in there -nice melodic touches, but it does all need developing further.

Mix is generally OK if a little bit bright and edgy at times?

filtering effect is quite annoying after a while...you have to remember with such ideas that restraint is everything! :0)

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https://soundcloud.com/picrimson/pi-crimson-disconnect

I improved the song. Thanks for your feedback, it helped me a lot!

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