PI CRIMSON - DISCONNECT (Future Bass, Melodic House) Feedback?
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- KVRer
- Topic Starter
- 4 posts since 15 Sep, 2018
https://soundcloud.com/picrimson/pi-crimson-disconnect
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1WhHbjUSMw0
I do hope you enjoy it and give me some feedback!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1WhHbjUSMw0
I do hope you enjoy it and give me some feedback!
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- KVRian
- 884 posts since 3 Jan, 2016
It sounds pretty good to me. It sort of stays close to that same motif all the way through but does vary some. Maybe a little more development to maintain interest but perhaps it’s actually fine for that genre.
- KVRAF
- 7691 posts since 11 Jun, 2006
nah, you are right, Phil. sounds are generic, its repetitive and boring.fastlanephil wrote:It sort of stays close to that same motif all the way through but does vary some. Maybe a little more development to maintain interest
the annoying filtering used throughout sounds like an old ruined cassette left out on a dashboard in the hot sun.
i quit half way in...
BUT...... mix is good
HW SYNTHS [KORG T2EX - AKAI AX80 - YAMAHA SY77 - ENSONIQ VFX]
HW MODULES [OBi M1000 - ROLAND MKS-50 - ROLAND JV880 - KURZ 1000PX]
SW [CHARLATAN - OBXD - OXE - ELEKTRO - MICROTERA - M1 - SURGE - RMiV]
DAW [ENERGY XT2/1U RACK WINXP / MAUDIO 1010LT PCI]
HW MODULES [OBi M1000 - ROLAND MKS-50 - ROLAND JV880 - KURZ 1000PX]
SW [CHARLATAN - OBXD - OXE - ELEKTRO - MICROTERA - M1 - SURGE - RMiV]
DAW [ENERGY XT2/1U RACK WINXP / MAUDIO 1010LT PCI]
- KVRAF
- 7624 posts since 21 Dec, 2002 from MD USA
I liked it. I didn't hit it and quit it!
my music: http://www.alexcooperusa.com
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- KVRer
- Topic Starter
- 4 posts since 15 Sep, 2018
Thanks for your feedback. You're right, I have to make it sound more interesting and I'll consider that for my new songs!layzer wrote:nah, you are right, Phil. sounds are generic, its repetitive and boring.fastlanephil wrote:It sort of stays close to that same motif all the way through but does vary some. Maybe a little more development to maintain interest
the annoying filtering used throughout sounds like an old ruined cassette left out on a dashboard in the hot sun.
i quit half way in...
BUT...... mix is good
- KVRAF
- 21191 posts since 8 Oct, 2014
My Feedback
Music - 7.5
Instruments - 8.5
Performance - 8.5
Mix - 9.5
Overall - 8.5
Comments: Foundation is fine but needs more variance. Mix is good.
Music - 7.5
Instruments - 8.5
Performance - 8.5
Mix - 9.5
Overall - 8.5
Comments: Foundation is fine but needs more variance. Mix is good.
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- KVRian
- 893 posts since 12 Jun, 2006
Some great ideas in there -nice melodic touches, but it does all need developing further.
Mix is generally OK if a little bit bright and edgy at times?
filtering effect is quite annoying after a while...you have to remember with such ideas that restraint is everything! :0)
Mix is generally OK if a little bit bright and edgy at times?
filtering effect is quite annoying after a while...you have to remember with such ideas that restraint is everything! :0)
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- KVRer
- Topic Starter
- 4 posts since 15 Sep, 2018
https://soundcloud.com/picrimson/pi-crimson-disconnect
I improved the song. Thanks for your feedback, it helped me a lot!
I improved the song. Thanks for your feedback, it helped me a lot!