Hey everyone this is my new tune it's a lot trancier than I noramlly make but it's still pretty tuff.
It's Called
G-Trance
Feedback on my new tune please!!!!
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- KVRAF
- 7672 posts since 9 Nov, 2003 from Netherlands
I felt the high-sequence in the beginning take too much room, even though its a well fitting sequence; it's demanding too much attention.
OVerall the high-end gets way too much emphasis I feel and it lacks that forward drive in the general groove. The piano halfway was a cool touch which I think could have gotten a bit more room.
Not bad, but in need of a way better mix.
OVerall the high-end gets way too much emphasis I feel and it lacks that forward drive in the general groove. The piano halfway was a cool touch which I think could have gotten a bit more room.
Not bad, but in need of a way better mix.
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- KVRer
- 1 posts since 20 Aug, 2004
It's late and I'm browsing, and I came upon your offer.
Here is some constructive criticism. First of all, that is a great recording. If they were locals(friends) doing a favor they knew what they were doing.
As for the song, I didn't hear any lyrics that pulled me toward any of the songs (nothing vulgar, explicit, or just plain magnetic[not expressivly detailed/summed]).
A bit monotone. I didn't hear any defining tones from the singer.
Need a little work on some of the breaks/builds in the band instruments(I need help myself).
Here is some constructive criticism. First of all, that is a great recording. If they were locals(friends) doing a favor they knew what they were doing.
As for the song, I didn't hear any lyrics that pulled me toward any of the songs (nothing vulgar, explicit, or just plain magnetic[not expressivly detailed/summed]).
A bit monotone. I didn't hear any defining tones from the singer.
Need a little work on some of the breaks/builds in the band instruments(I need help myself).
TCMeadoe
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- Banned
- 5089 posts since 12 Jun, 2001 from Wusik Dot Com
Yeah, that melodic high-notes is sounding very high here. Killing the rest of the instruments. The Drums are low in volume.
The intro is way too repetitive, but maybe its me, so I will shut-up now...
Actually, after listening more, the whole song I only hear that high-notes and almost nothing else. Maybe is my speakers, maybe is the song-mix?
Wk
The intro is way too repetitive, but maybe its me, so I will shut-up now...
Actually, after listening more, the whole song I only hear that high-notes and almost nothing else. Maybe is my speakers, maybe is the song-mix?Wk
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 158 posts since 27 Feb, 2004
alright mate cheers for the comments, I thought the main riff was quite powerful too, I guess your right.
As for TCMeadoe I think you've reviewed the wrong track cause there isn't any vocals in my track.
As for TCMeadoe I think you've reviewed the wrong track cause there isn't any vocals in my track.
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- AcousticHippie
- 4525 posts since 12 Mar, 2003
xanda123 wrote:alright mate cheers for the comments, I thought the main riff was quite powerful too, I guess your right.
As for TCMeadoe I think you've reviewed the wrong track cause there isn't any vocals in my track.
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- Banned
- 5089 posts since 12 Jun, 2001 from Wusik Dot Com
Maybe a bit OT, but Xanda, do you listen to "Astral Projection"? For me is the only trance I can really listen to. 
Hope you don't mind me saying that...
Wk
Hope you don't mind me saying that...Wk
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 158 posts since 27 Feb, 2004
yeah now people are giving me the opinion that the high frequenices are a bit to much, I totally agree I'll give it another mixdown.
Anyone else wanna help me out?
Anyone else wanna help me out?
