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Doug Nelson · Post by **Doug Nelson** » Fri Sep 24, 2004 4:45 am

I think it's great you've met someone that stirs you to create.

TotcProductions · Post by **TotcProductions** » Fri Sep 24, 2004 5:31 am

Doug Nelson wrote:I think it's great you've met someone that stirs you to create.

hehe...me too....that's why i'm composing this...hopefully, to stir the same in her.

mystahr · Post by **mystahr** » Fri Sep 24, 2004 6:35 am

And you should be embarrased

Leaving us waiting all this time

Great start of hopefully a full tune for us and a relationship for you

toine6 · Post by **toine6** » Fri Sep 24, 2004 6:46 am

TotcProductions wrote: Flute sounds nice actually....My sister plays flute rather well....I'll have to kidnap her from college and force her to record something for me. hehe.

Yeah, and if the song doesn't get her in bed...there is always alchahol.

With your sister

Sicko!!!

TotcProductions · Post by **TotcProductions** » Fri Sep 24, 2004 3:35 pm

toine6 wrote:
TotcProductions wrote: Flute sounds nice actually....My sister plays flute rather well....I'll have to kidnap her from college and force her to record something for me. hehe.

Yeah, and if the song doesn't get her in bed...there is always alchahol.
With your sister Sicko!!!

Ahahahaha! I was waiting for some sick f**k to say something like that.

from jersey dude, not the styx in alabama.

Sicklecell666 · Post by **Sicklecell666** » Fri Sep 24, 2004 3:54 pm

TotcProductions wrote: Ahahahaha! I was waiting for some sick f**k to say something like that. from jersey dude, not the styx in alabama.

I'm 5 minutes from the Georgia/ Alabama state line..

What makes you think I wouldn't screw your sister too?

spaceman · Post by **spaceman** » Fri Sep 24, 2004 4:04 pm

I would harmonise the yeahs

Steven West · Post by **Steven West** » Fri Sep 24, 2004 4:12 pm

If you really want to set the mood with this woman, put this on in the background....

http://www.artistnow.com/./write/audio/13457-35831.mp3

TotcProductions · Post by **TotcProductions** » Fri Sep 24, 2004 4:50 pm

I don't know steve....think that track is meant for the second date.

It's coming along nicely though....did a whole shit load more tracking late last night and early this morning....spent the last hour piecing it together (I like to do things the hard way, instead of just recording it straight through.

) There are a few spots that need a bit more of a "transition" if you will.....I need to compose some more drum loops that have a bit more of a build up to them as well....once I get that finished it should be ready for vocals and then it's straight to post production!

Steven West · Post by **Steven West** » Fri Sep 24, 2004 5:08 pm

Okay, 2nd date it is!

But I really like the intro beat and all, so if you can reprise that somewhere, and maybe just a couple of light fills or 1 or 2 bar pauses - I could see it really working out for you.

Be interested to hear the melody lines and vocals you come up with too. Keep us posted.
And best of luck!

TotcProductions · Post by **TotcProductions** » Fri Sep 24, 2004 6:56 pm

TotcProductions wrote:Alright kiddies...here's the deals...

I'm ashamed to post this here in public....especially given the fact that it's the first music of my own that i've posted....anyway, I'm composing this track for a girl that has ignited enough of a passion in me to compose in the first place....another emarassing point.
It's only 40 or 50 seconds long so far...end finishes rather abruptly...but that's coz it's no where near finished yet....I wanted to get a feel for people think of the basic atmosphearics of it....I did a quick mix/master job on it (which I think is really f**king good considering i couldn't have spent anymore than 4 minutes on it) especially the imaging...it's very WIDE. So, please take the time to indulge a pathetic romantic jazzy/groove type track at it's very beginnings and give me some feedback. Thanx...oh, here's the link:

[EDIT]Alright, The rythm base is finished....Please Download again from the same link and let me know your thoughts[EDIT}

Test Track-Take 2

Steven West · Post by **Steven West** » Fri Sep 24, 2004 11:15 pm

REALLY NICE now!

I love how the phase effect sust gently 'sucks back' the piano, and how the upper octave bits 'dance and tickle around the nipples'... er, um - great improvement.

One thing though, the drums seem a little to hectic in the middle area to me. Something about those rolls don't seem quite right?

Other than that, I really like the sound and effects and music you got on this.

TotcProductions · Post by **TotcProductions** » Sat Sep 25, 2004 5:08 am

Steven West wrote:REALLY NICE now! I love how the phase effect sust gently 'sucks back' the piano, and how the upper octave bits 'dance and tickle around the nipples'... er, um - great improvement.

One thing though, the drums seem a little to hectic in the middle area to me. Something about those rolls don't seem quite right?

Other than that, I really like the sound and effects and music you got on this.

Thanx steve! yeah....I was listening to it in the car and thought the drums were a bit much myself...i'll lax them a bit.

ToTc Posting A Pussy Track. (Track Updated)