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Talvin · Post by **Talvin** » Thu Mar 24, 2005 12:18 pm

Hi everyone

. I've been hanging around here for quite some time and finally dare to put one of my songs online. As you all seem to be nice and honest people but also experienced musicians I invite you to comment on the song. The song is made with Sampletank2, Virtual Guitarist and Real Guitar.

Talvin · Post by **Talvin** » Thu Mar 24, 2005 1:41 pm

I just learned that I'm not allowed to post a direct link to my song, so I've removed it.

Talvin · Post by **Talvin** » Thu Mar 24, 2005 1:44 pm

Here's the link to the song.
http://audioshots.com/auditorium/viewto ... 32&start=0
Any comment is welcome!

Talvin · Post by **Talvin** » Fri Mar 25, 2005 12:47 pm

Why does noone answer? Is it because I'm new here?

Sneeef

Glassback · Post by **Glassback** » Fri Mar 25, 2005 9:04 pm

A very pretty pop song.
The vocals could do with coming up front a bit more, but I like this tune.

Actually, on repeat listens this gets really good mate.
Nicely done.

Kriminal · Post by **Kriminal** » Fri Mar 25, 2005 9:19 pm

Yeah, this is ok really. Not my kinda music, but it sounds well done, good pop tune.

Savage Garden anyone?

TankGirl · Post by **TankGirl** » Fri Mar 25, 2005 11:14 pm

Very enjoyable. You have a lot of talent.

vurt · Post by **vurt** » Fri Mar 25, 2005 11:34 pm

Kriminal wrote:

Savage Garden anyone?

one or two vicious plants why?

anyway yeah great little piece of pop

as tankgirl says there is a talent here,good luck with it mate

mn · Post by mn » Fri Mar 25, 2005 11:34 pm

Sounds great. Vocals remind me of Mitch Easter a bit, and could come out just a hair, though I don't mind them as is. I think the "accent/harmonic" notes need pulled back a tad. Keep it coming, I like stuff like this.

rsmus7 · Post by **rsmus7** » Fri Mar 25, 2005 11:46 pm

great song man

good performance and proper mixing.

the vocals, well I think only in the intro the could maybe need a 0,1dB more or so, but it is ok.

You really have no reason to be shy.
Bring more of this music.
Sometimes I like this guitarpopsongs.

carlos · Post by **carlos** » Fri Mar 25, 2005 11:56 pm

excellent arrangement on the track, nice use of the virtual guitars mate!!

Talvin · Post by **Talvin** » Sat Mar 26, 2005 1:52 am

Thanks guys

! I really appreciate this. For me it is a kind of liberation to finally have posted a track and to get good reviews.

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