CypherOne - DiscoShit (removed for now)
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- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 7936 posts since 18 Feb, 2003 from out there somewhere
nothing to see here, move along.
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Last edited by CypherOne on Sat Apr 23, 2005 10:01 am, edited 1 time in total.
- KVRAF
- 4618 posts since 15 Jul, 2001 from Holmfirth, West Yorkshire, U.K
brilliant
but again, you keep it on one level.
it peddles over one root note all the time, I am sure this is much the same as other music in this genre but for me it's frustrating because it could be so much more.
I think i would also like to hear some chopped break hits with the electronic hits.
as usuall your ideas are fantastic, the rest is just my opinion. (ignore at will)
but again, you keep it on one level.
it peddles over one root note all the time, I am sure this is much the same as other music in this genre but for me it's frustrating because it could be so much more.
I think i would also like to hear some chopped break hits with the electronic hits.
as usuall your ideas are fantastic, the rest is just my opinion. (ignore at will)
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- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 7936 posts since 18 Feb, 2003 from out there somewhere
cheers guys. Matt - that's fair comment, I shall see if I can work a key change in there and put it up again. I'm just kinda lazy and once I get into a groove (or maybe rut) I tend to just want to see the track finished. You know how it feels when you're on your 500th listen....
- KVRAF
- 4170 posts since 2 Feb, 2003 from lost in music
dlíng
laters
laters
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- KVRAF
- 4960 posts since 21 Oct, 2003 from UK
Go there Cypher!!
Lovin it!
But then, I always do don't I?
You make great music my friend - I've always said so.
I'd dance to this on a night out, that's for sure.
In fact if this was published, I'd buy it.
So long as it had a couple of dozen or so remixes with it.
Seriously - top dance fodder mate - I it.
Really got me fired up. I'd play this just before going out to get me in the mood.
Lovin it!
But then, I always do don't I?
You make great music my friend - I've always said so.
I'd dance to this on a night out, that's for sure.
In fact if this was published, I'd buy it.
So long as it had a couple of dozen or so remixes with it.
Seriously - top dance fodder mate - I it.
Really got me fired up. I'd play this just before going out to get me in the mood.
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- KVRAF
- 4960 posts since 21 Oct, 2003 from UK
It works well as it is.CypherOne wrote:cheers guys. Matt - that's fair comment, I shall see if I can work a key change in there and put it up again. I'm just kinda lazy and once I get into a groove (or maybe rut) I tend to just want to see the track finished. You know how it feels when you're on your 500th listen....
It's a dance track.
Dare I say it? A little trancey. As such, imo, it works really well.
Don't listen to these muso types, they'll just lead you astray.
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- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 7936 posts since 18 Feb, 2003 from out there somewhere
cheers Mick.
See the thing is, I want to improve and be able to make other types of track too, so it's really useful to me to get the input of these so-called real musicians.
See the thing is, I want to improve and be able to make other types of track too, so it's really useful to me to get the input of these so-called real musicians.
- KVRAF
- 4170 posts since 2 Feb, 2003 from lost in music
tbh
a bit more varitation would be nice,
for my taste the voice comes in a bit late at 2:10
and the drums sound ahhmm.... too ........clean ? maybe a bit more lofi on the drums and a bit more .........
ahhmm.....
dirt
on the mix
beside my fussing a great tune again and after the looooooong intro it gets more interesting and enough variation going on.
So maybe you just cut the intro down a bit( just to please me )
Fine tune alltogether.
a bit more varitation would be nice,
for my taste the voice comes in a bit late at 2:10
and the drums sound ahhmm.... too ........clean ? maybe a bit more lofi on the drums and a bit more .........
ahhmm.....
dirt
on the mix
beside my fussing a great tune again and after the looooooong intro it gets more interesting and enough variation going on.
So maybe you just cut the intro down a bit( just to please me )
Fine tune alltogether.
- KVRAF
- 4618 posts since 15 Jul, 2001 from Holmfirth, West Yorkshire, U.K
nonsense Mark
it's nothing to do with key changes,
changing the root note now and then would only add dynamics and take it somewhere.
there are tons of great dance tunes that dont hang on the same root all the way.
it's nothing to do with key changes,
changing the root note now and then would only add dynamics and take it somewhere.
there are tons of great dance tunes that dont hang on the same root all the way.
Glassback wrote:[Don't listen to these muso types, they'll just lead you astray.
- KVRAF
- 4618 posts since 15 Jul, 2001 from Holmfirth, West Yorkshire, U.K
I never said anything about a key change.
CypherOne wrote:Matt - that's fair comment, I shall see if I can work a key change
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- KVRAF
- 4960 posts since 21 Oct, 2003 from UK
- KVRAF
- 4618 posts since 15 Jul, 2001 from Holmfirth, West Yorkshire, U.K
Mick sorry
heavy night on the Vapureyes
heavy night on the Vapureyes
Glassback wrote:Who's Mark?
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- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 7936 posts since 18 Feb, 2003 from out there somewhere
just demonstrating my lack of knowledge I meant the relative minor thingamejig.topaz wrote:I never said anything about a key change.
CypherOne wrote:Matt - that's fair comment, I shall see if I can work a key change
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- KVRAF
- 4960 posts since 21 Oct, 2003 from UK
Tha's ok Manfred.topaz wrote:Mick sorry
heavy night on the Vapureyes
Glassback wrote:Who's Mark?