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:oops: Another newbe! New to this forum but I use Dogs on Acid a little. Read a few posts, listened a little. :hihi: Glad to join to review and post. I finshed a piece recently and could use an extra set of ears. The song title is (You Have Been De-Voiced) Z

http://www.beatbiz.net/artist.php?USERID=493 <-- Click here

http://www.acidplanet.com/artist.asp?songs=298256&T=236

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what stylee is it then?

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welcome to KVR

not bad i like the main-idea of the song - but it's getting a little boring after a while cause it's over and over again the same and the sound is to muddy (did u put an lowpass over all ?) - use an EQ to bring
some life in by raising some high frequencies

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Excellent! Just f**king excellent! :hyper: Only thing I would suggest is to bring the drums up a little (punch and/or light distortion?)to be more fierce. But great synth work and production on all your action! :love:

Sweet, just f**king sweet! :hail:

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snooky wrote:what stylee is it then?
A bit of DarkStep / DnB :o

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verstaerker wrote:welcome to KVR

not bad i like the main-idea of the song - but it's getting a little boring after a while cause it's over and over again the same and the sound is to muddy (did u put an lowpass over all ?) - use an EQ to bring
some life in by raising some high frequencies

I did a 25hz cut to the entire track to get rid of the low sounds, I need a little :help: with Eq at times. Thanks for the review. Z

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Steven West wrote:Excellent! Just f**king excellent! :hyper: Only thing I would suggest is to bring the drums up a little (punch and/or light distortion?)to be more fierce. But great synth work and production on all your action! :love:

Sweet, just f**king sweet! :hail:
Thanks! I need to figure out how to get my drums a little more punchy, I know it's a compression thing, or I can do a 40hz cut and boost at another part... :help: If you know :help: I know my synth could use a little more distortion. I am a little intimadated when messing with Volume and Distortion. Thanks for the listen and advice, appreciate it. Z

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Great work man. No matter how the sound is, its just angle of view. Dont change anything, your track sounds originaly and thats what I like. You must listen to them many times before you understand why is this sound just like that.

I dont like vision of comercial sounding record, which interests you for first time and makes you "WOW!". More important than sound design is content.

I fell in your track some content but I recomend you to spend more time on your tracks and add more harmonic/melodic changes or more sounds to interest ones mind. That will improve your performance a lot.

You have musical talent. Do you play something ? I bet that you play.

Keep this going on. I like that.

Jura

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jura wrote:Great work man. No matter how the sound is, its just angle of view. Dont change anything, your track sounds originaly and thats what I like. You must listen to them many times before you understand why is this sound just like that.

I dont like vision of comercial sounding record, which interests you for first time and makes you "WOW!". More important than sound design is content.

I fell in your track some content but I recomend you to spend more time on your tracks and add more harmonic/melodic changes or more sounds to interest ones mind. That will improve your performance a lot.

You have musical talent. Do you play something ? I bet that you play.

Keep this going on. I like that.

Jura
Thanks for listening, I used to play the Bass 7 year back never got real far playing just high school kids in a band, I stoped because I was in a bind and had to sell it. I appreciate the advice, I do need to work alot on harmonics. I just finished another track, I can always use an extra set of ears on it.

http://www.beatbiz.net/artist.php?USERID=493 <-- "Gangster Tribute"


http://www.acidplanet.com/artist.asp?so ... 256&T=9063

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Sorry but I dont like "Gangster Tribute". Weakest thing what I heard from you. Sry. But iam looking forward to hear some new track from you, not from Jim Jarmush. :shrug:

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Cool track - fueled by a nice propulsion - agreed about bringing in different harmonic/melodic stuff but that is also very subjective...will be on the look-out for more of your pieces

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Quite a groovy little tune this, I'd make the drums a bit more in yer face, I usually cheat and pump the shite out of them with camelphat and a free limiter and some eq... also some more drum variations would be cool.

Like the stereo spread weirdness going on with the vox and some of the synth parts.

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Appreciate all the love and reviews, I will work harder to see if I can only improve the soundz. Cheers Z

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